THE DRESS
She touched the dress she wore in dreams,
and stroked the silken needle lace.
She held the dress she wore that night
and felt the bleached white calico.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: March 16th, 2017 00:39
- Comment from author about the poem: A short simple piece plus another of my etchings - a commission now hanging inside the hall.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 26
Comments7
Great write! Love it.
Thanks so much for commenting Poems
Very good write.
If your image is an etching I bow to your absolute skill.
Sorry Goldfinch - I used the word in a sort of metaphorical sense - it's a watercolour. Thanks for looking.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Another excellent POEM & PAINTING ~ In my mind I can visualise the Dream ~ the Dress ~ the Damsel ~ at a Ball inside that lovely Manor House. Love the elegance and delicacy (of talk and topic) in the short but dulcet ode. Thanks for dreaming and sharing ~ yiou are sio so creative with water colours & words ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my latest poem and my TRUMP FUSION ! Thanks B.
You are so kind - will now go to the fusion.
Very good Michael
Well done sir..
Thanks PH
We can dream, but then we have to face reality. Well spoken, Michael.
And that is a well done etching. - Phil A.
Thank you PHIL - yes we can dream - not that I can ever recall many of mine.
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