If I could talk to my mom today
I'd tell her about the legacy left behind
And all the "I'm sorry's" growing up
I wish I could put time on rewind
We'd talk about the different things
going on and how beautiful heaven is
I'd thank her for showing up in my dreams
and giving me peace because of this
If I could talk to my mom today
I'd ask her how she got through the strife
Of having panic disorder, among other things
That might help me a lot in this life
I just want to borrow her, Lord
for the smallest little chat
And maybe a hug from above
Nothing more than that
- Author: Christina (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 17th, 2017 13:00
- Comment from author about the poem: My mom passed away 2 years ago
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 293
Comments5
WONDERFUL CHRIS ~ I got a real blessing from this ! Firstly because it was straight from your loving heart ! Secondly because of the deep love you will always have for your Mom and Thirdly because you have a real inner assurance that you Mom is in Heaven and safe for eternity in the Arms of JESUS ~ AMEN.. Your final stanza is very poignant ! This poem is in essence A HUG FROM ABOVE ~ for all who read.. Also I have assurance that because this poem is a Prayer GOD will read it and pass your message on to your Mom and as you talk to God in Prayer so in essence you are communicating ~ through God to your Mom and back again. I trust that this concept will give you peace of heart and mind and that because you pray to GOD every day you will feel guidance and support and understanding STILL from your MOM. If you have a query on this please contact me with a message ~ OK. I love this poem ~ Heavenly HUGS ~ BRIAN
Thanks so much for such an in depth response. I really appreciate it. Yes, I think she got the message I needed her to get today. SO glad you liked the poem! Heavenly hugs to you--Christina
I lost both my parents a few years back but I still miss them as much as I ever did. I am so privileged to have such great parents and have their photographs in my dressing room and talk to them every day. Yes I know the pain in losing them but rejoice in their memory as I am sure you do - as this great poem shows.
Thank you so much for your input, and your compliment. It is appreciated!
A verse from the heart will not go unheard dear Christina - Heaven will hold your prayer and help you cope with loss of a much loved Mom - - a heart-touching read.
Thank you so much Fay! It is very much appreciated!
Love the last lines, in particular, Christina! Sorry for the sad anniversary. But, your lovely poem is such a beautiful thought.
Thanks so much for your wonderful reply! It is appreciated!
Wow. The was powerful! You had me beginning to tear up in only four stanzas! Really nice work!
Thanks so much! I really appreciate that!!
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