Michael Edwards

THREE COUPLETS

THREE COUPLETS

                                                      

 

Every pair of eyes that see

see rainbows colours differently.

 

Every person who perceives

their thoughts float down on different leaves.

 

Every person’s private dreams

sail in sleep on different streams.

 

Comments6

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks MICHAEL for an exquisite painting and elegant couplets my favourite rhyming pattern ! Ha' but nature the power gie us ~ to ken oorsen as ithers see us ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN. Please clock my ode ~ thanks B.

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Brian - appreciate your comments.

    • Goldfinch60

      Super write. Super painting.

    • willyweed

      wow Michael maybe I am amazed , beautiful on both counts! ww

    • orchidee

      A fine write and painting!

      • Michael Edwards

        Much appreciated - glad you like them.

      • Garry

        Lovely use of words. It flows beautifully. Nice imagery. Love the painting too.

      • MendedFences27

        Loved the couplets. Loved the painting. Clouds in the sky? We all see things differently, just like art. Eye of the beholder and all. Words too, can be appreciated in many different ways. My favorite is stanza 2, perception on leaves, floating. A great image, as is the painting. - Phil A.

        • Michael Edwards

          Thanks Phil - yes No2 is my favourite as well. Eye of the beholder sums it up well.



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