In Transit.

Fay Slimm.

In Transit.

 

Jewelled with
rainbow translucence roll
rain-bead balls
slowly down outside windows.

Golden-globe
seed pearls, clear watery
glories slide
in uniformed lines, floorward.

Diamonds in
transit they shine and fire
sparkle from
each crystaline orb's inside.

Smallest gems,
if unnoticed, might seem
irrelevant,
joining the fall into sheen.

Caught however
by eyes with keen poetic
insight odes
to rain-drops might follow.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 22nd, 2017 06:27
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful write with great imagery.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thank you and glad you enjoyed the imagery my friend.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      WATER FAY is a far from simple substance ! Just H2O but because it has a positive (HYDROGEN) and negative (OXYGEN) ends ( H~O~H ) it sticks to itself and forms the alluring drops you mention. They can bejewel a Spider's Web or trace patterns on windows. each glittering orb is a PRISM and can split sunlight into a spectrum R-O-Y-G-B-I-V ! Which is how rainbows form. AND (as you say) rain drops really do stir the muse ! A true poet sees not only a rainbow ~ but also an ODE ~ in a humble raindrop. Love all you poems & pictures FAY ~ Yours B

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ah such an informative and interesting comment this verse raised from your well informed mind dear Brian - I love the depth and time you spend on supporting poetry of all sorts here on MPS.

      • Michael Edwards

        Inspired choice of subject and inspired piece of writing too.

        • Fay Slimm.

          My thanks to you Michael - - I love the liquid globules of rain-drops as they collect on my window - glad you enjoyed the read.

        • Tony36

          Wonderfully beautiful write

        • willyweed

          there is beauty everywhere if we care to look , beautiful poetry my Lady!

        • ron parrish aka wordman

          really liked fay,beautiful images

        • Garry

          Beautifully crafted. Really enjoyed it

        • MendedFences27

          Raindrops are gems, and so is this poem. Pearls, diamonds, crystaline orbs, how many forms can water take? To the poetic eye, whatever the mind can imagine. A wonderful concept brought to fruition in a dramatic manner. I never sensed rain, only gems and colors galore. Wonderful. - Phil A.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Delighted you liked the read Phil - - yes raindrops are food for a poetic mind - - I could watch their formation on my windowpane for ages.



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