Augustus

The Bloom

A flower opened early this morning

It came into the world as I slept

so soft, beautiful and so alone

eminent

in such a world

 

Soft and fragile

pushing your way into existence

making a statement for a day

then fading.

Such is the world.

 

 

 

Augustus / Folsom LA / March 2017

Comments9

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Sometimes "A" that which is ephemeral and transient ~ is the more beautiful for being so. In essence only the very good die very young ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN Loved the visual ! Please check my Solar HAIKU ~ Thanks B

    • Augustus

      Thanks for your comment. Been away.

    • Garry

      Particularly like the last verse. All that effort and then....

      • Augustus

        Yes, such is life. Thanks.

      • Tony36

        Glad to have you back, great write

        • Augustus

          Thanks Tony.

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • Michael Edwards

            What a superb little posting - enjoyed this one very much.

            • Augustus

              You are too kind.

            • Christina8

              Everyday I see that you have posted, I am happy! What a beautiful poem so descriptively telling us (and showing--nice picture) of the flowers struggle to exist. Great job!-Christina

              • Augustus

                Thanks Christina.

              • WriteBeLight

                Sounds like some of the poets here with their daily struggles. Sometimes they are blooming all over the place and then not so much. And, thankfully they return. Very beautiful and timely!

                • Augustus

                  The bloom is off this rose.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Beautiful write.

                  • Augustus

                    Appreciate

                  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

                    Novel comparison, temporary life in this world n temporary floral bloom. Great muse in brevity. Kudos sir.

                    Nice to read from u again, hoping u will too my latest.

                    • Augustus

                      Thanks szk. Been away. Will try catch up

                    • Augustus



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