A flower opened early this morning
It came into the world as I slept
so soft, beautiful and so alone
eminent
in such a world
Soft and fragile
pushing your way into existence
making a statement for a day
then fading.
Such is the world.
Augustus / Folsom LA / March 2017
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Author:
Augustus (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 28th, 2017 07:52
- Category: Spiritual
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Sometimes "A" that which is ephemeral and transient ~ is the more beautiful for being so. In essence only the very good die very young ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN Loved the visual ! Please check my Solar HAIKU ~ Thanks B
Thanks for your comment. Been away.
Particularly like the last verse. All that effort and then....
Yes, such is life. Thanks.
Glad to have you back, great write
Thanks Tony.
Welcome
What a superb little posting - enjoyed this one very much.
You are too kind.
Everyday I see that you have posted, I am happy! What a beautiful poem so descriptively telling us (and showing--nice picture) of the flowers struggle to exist. Great job!-Christina
Thanks Christina.
Sounds like some of the poets here with their daily struggles. Sometimes they are blooming all over the place and then not so much. And, thankfully they return. Very beautiful and timely!
The bloom is off this rose.
Beautiful write.
Appreciate
Novel comparison, temporary life in this world n temporary floral bloom. Great muse in brevity. Kudos sir.
Nice to read from u again, hoping u will too my latest.
Thanks szk. Been away. Will try catch up
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