SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

SATURN IS MY RAINBOW GIRL ~ RINGS ROUND HER SWIRL !

 

JUPITER ~ the GOD

ruler of all the planets

with his golden rod !

 

SATURN ~ full of bling

she's quite a girl ~ round her swirl

ring on shining ring !

 

URANUS waves her

wand and sprinkles her star dust

wherever she must !

 

NEPTUNE ~ strange to me

he has no liquid water

but ~ GOD of the SEA ?

 

PLUTO ~ demoted

'cos nobody voted for

planet status quo 

so he had to go !

 

Thanks for reading ~ comments welcome ~ Heavenly Hugs ~ BRIAN

 

Thanks to those who commented on Part 1.  I have given PLUTO an

extra line ~ because (along with SNOOPY) he's a favorite dog of mine !

 

 

 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 29th, 2017 04:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: I have always been fascinated by the Planets in our SOLAR SYSTEM ~ each is one is awesome and we all have a special affinity with a specific PLANET because of our Star sign ! I'm VIRGO (which is why I'm a perfectionist !) so my Planet is MERCURY ! Mercury only takes 88 days to circle the Sun and the metal Mercury (quicksilver) is the only metallic element which is a liquid at ambient temperature 15C ( 50F). People born under the Mercury planetary sign (VIRGOS) tend to be verbose ~ good wordsmiths and good poets ! Planet Earth is the only LIVING PLANET in the Solar System and so far the only one we have discovered in the MILKY WAY. This is why we should conserve and preserve the Earth's unique and delicate ecosystems. If we make Planet Earth uninhabitable ~ for Humans ~ there is nowhere else to go ! Comments welcome ~ Love to All ~ BRIAN XOX
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  • Goldfinch60

    Pluto used to be my favourite but I do't watch Walt Disney much nowadays.
    Good write.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks pleased you enjoyed it ! PLUTO is an awesome DOG ~ different from SNOOPY but more loving. SNOOPY has a mind of his own and leads Charlie brown a dance. PLUOTO'S sole aim is to please MICKEY ~ my kind of DOG ! Yours BRIAN

    • orchidee

      A fine write.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks "O" ~ I know you are a HAIKUOPHILE ! BRIAN

      • willyweed

        I think there are other planets that support life, in other systems, and dimensions? very interesting as usual my friend!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks WILLY ~ Yes indeed there are millions who think like you ~ but to date no proof. I am a member of SETI (Search for extra-terrestrial intelligence) they have been looking for over 50 years and so far zilch ! People don't realise just how narrow the ecological conditions for "Life on Earth" are for life to exist. Also there is no evidence that Life Evolved on Earth from inanimate matter. If there was LIFE on another planet ~ it wouldn't be there through CHANCE EVOLUTION it would be there because GOD chose to CREATE it there ~ as He did on Planet Earth ~ OK Yours BRIAN

          • willyweed

            Yes I agree but GOD did his work all over in many mansions

          • Tony36

            Great write

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks TONY ~ The Planets & Space always move my MUSE ~ BRIAN

              • Tony36

                Welcome

              • WriteBeLight

                Great topic Brian!

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks HONEY ~ Outer space always moves my muse ! Celestial Hugs ~ BRIAN

                • Christina8

                  You did a really nice job on these Haiku! You even came up with a rhyme for Uranus which is hard to do! lol Superb authors notes.. All around fantastic job! Hugs-Christina

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    THANKS FOR YOUR encouraging comment CHRIS ~ As you know by now ~ I like to inform and entertain ~ also to lift our Members spirits ! ET Hugs BRIAN

                  • Michael Edwards

                    More than done it justice Brian - super stuff.

                    • BRIAN & ANGELA

                      Thanks MICHAEL you comment are always savoured with SALT ~ Yours BRIAN

                    • Aamina

                      Wow i loved this. I study physics so planets to me are quite appealing, this threw me off the usual spectrum of planetary talk =)

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        THANKS AA ~ no finer subject (Physics) and The Solar System no finer topic ! Thanks for your comments ~ BRIAN



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