DAWN WAITS
It is love,
it is her,
they are there,
it is lit,
the key fits,
and dawn waits.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Bet you didn't expect this. This is in answer to the last questions posed in each stanza in the poem I published yesterday - I wrote this as a stand-alone in 6 by 3 format. Hope you like it. Plus another painting of course.
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Beautiful ending.
Good art as well. Does the car have its wheels on the path?
thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite narrow. Interestingly this is my road in the village and my property is set back behind the cottages - it is private in front of my property and there is also a paved section which belongs to me. However when they had a bit of a clampdown on pavement parking a few years back I had a note on my windscreen saying I was illegally parked and I had great pleasure in telling the authorities (armed wit h a copy of the deeds) that it was they who had acted illegally be entering into a private cul-de-sac.
Very good, and very clever.
Thanks Garry
Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours are wonderful.
Thanks so much Fay
Great write
Thanks Tony
Welcome
GREAT EXPECTATIONS MICHAEL ~ In my experience the last lines of verses in any poem are always the BEST. You have just proved it ! BRIAN ~ Love the picture so "English Country Lane !"
Cheers Brian - yes it's my lane although I live behind the cottages to the left. Must agree about the last line - I often have one in mind even before I start scribing.
Great recap. In all, the only answers we wanted to hear. Phil A.
Cheers Phil - now to post something a bit different.
Well, nice ending. Great picture, as always Michael.
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