Michael Edwards

DAWN WAITS

DAWN WAITS

 

It is love,

it is her,

they are there,

it is lit,

the key fits,

and dawn waits.

 

Comments10

  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful ending.

    Good art as well. Does the car have its wheels on the path?

  • Michael Edwards

    thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite narrow. Interestingly this is my road in the village and my property is set back behind the cottages - it is private in front of my property and there is also a paved section which belongs to me. However when they had a bit of a clampdown on pavement parking a few years back I had a note on my windscreen saying I was illegally parked and I had great pleasure in telling the authorities (armed wit h a copy of the deeds) that it was they who had acted illegally be entering into a private cul-de-sac.

  • Garry

    Very good, and very clever.

  • Fay Slimm.

    Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours are wonderful.

  • Tony36

    Great write

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    GREAT EXPECTATIONS MICHAEL ~ In my experience the last lines of verses in any poem are always the BEST. You have just proved it ! BRIAN ~ Love the picture so "English Country Lane !"

  • Michael Edwards

    Cheers Brian - yes it's my lane although I live behind the cottages to the left. Must agree about the last line - I often have one in mind even before I start scribing.

  • MendedFences27

    Great recap. In all, the only answers we wanted to hear. Phil A.

  • Michael Edwards

    Cheers Phil - now to post something a bit different.

  • WriteBeLight

    Well, nice ending. Great picture, as always Michael.



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