MY LOVE is like a CROCODILE
She loves to bite and then to smile
MY LOVE is like a CHIMPANZEE
Love monkeyin' around with me
MY LOVE is like a POLAR BEAR
But much less hairy everywhere !
MY LOVE is like a LIONESS
She hugs me like a trouser press
MY LOVE is like a BOMBAY DUCK
Khama Sutra ~ her cookery book !
MY LOVE is like a PEACOCKS TAIL
her fifty tints make love ~ plain sail !
MY LOVE is like a HUMMING BIRD
the sweetest hmmmm I've ever heard
MY LOVE is like a PLAYFUL KITTEN
one "tickle my tum" and I was smitten
MY LOVE is a CHAMELEON
her color changes turn me on
MY LOVE is like a WELL STOCKED ZOO
I enter her cage and she thrills me through !
Thanks for sharing ~ comments welcome ~ Grrrrrrr BRIAN
There are many more stanzas ~ but I've just shared 10 ~ OK
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BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The EVOLUTIONISTS tell us we are all ANIMALS "between the sheets" ! What Animal are you "in love". When the MOON is full my love is a WOLVERINE and howls so loud the neighbors have put in a sound complaint to the Landlord ! Why not write a MENAGERIAL LOVE POEM of your own ? Love in the CAGE ~ BRIAN XOX
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Super write and analogy.
THANKS BROTHER ~ I am sure with your years of experience you can empathise ! BRIAN
Well I've been called a silly ass - does that count?
HEE ~ HAW ! BRIAN
Well written and expressed Great write
Thanks TONY ~ what animal are you ? BRIAN
I am a wolf
Hooooooooooooooooooooowl ~ BRIAN
I can't say what animal I am but after 17 years of being with the same person I guess it's working. Very good write and I love the last couplet the best. Great job!!! Hugs--Christina
Thanks CHRIS ~ pleased you enjoyed it ! I a good couplet poem th final couplet should always e the best ~ pleased you agreed with that ! Thanks for caring ~ You will always be a PANDA to me ~ Panda Hugs ~ BRIAN !
This is wonderful I love it
As to say what animal I am it would be a shame to tell
I ruin all relationships so maybe I'm a snake who took a bite of the fruit from the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil.
Or am I a a different animal? It's hard to tell but it's just a kind of love...many don't even have a certain type...
Thanks WG ~ pleased you loved it. Basically it is a fun poem ~ but the serious side is to see how we relate to the Animal Kingdom. All animals have positive and negative traits. Snakes make wonderful pets ~ because they are very self-sufficient and some Show Girls use a snake in their act ! BUT snakes can sometimes hug you too tight ! Sometimes at parties we play a game where everybody has to assign an animal to everyone else from a limited list ! It's surprising how often different person chose the same animal (say a Koala Bear) fro the ame person. I am a Monkey ~ all Monkeys have positive and negative traits ! Thinking of you ~ every Blessing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
I am an Owl , hoo me?
That figures WILLY ~ You are always giving a HOOT about something or other ! TOO WIT TOO WOO BRIAN
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