RED ~I just got outa bed ~ so warm !
I love the redness of the early dawn
ORANGE ~ that's the morning drink for me
A BOY must have his Vitamin C
YELLOW it's no joke ~ my egg has a yellow yoke
A protein choice I make ~ the sp(h)ell I break
GREEN MOI ? By~cycle off to work I go ~ no snow
It's SPRING ~ "Green grow the rushes O" I sing
BLUE is the sky as the clouds rush by
But work's not blue ~ it has a greyish hue !
INDIGO my mood ~ and I'm no prude
I cycle homeward slow to nod to girls ~ I know
I won't get far ~ they like MEN with a flashy car !
VIOLET ~ the coolest color yet ~ I'm like a
LLAMA curled up in my purple striped PYJALLMA
Thanks for visiting ~ Comments welcome ~ B
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: GOD IS LOVE ! He created a Rainbow World and the created the Human Race and one of his many gifts was COLOR VISION. Our eyes are a masterpiece of creation ~ only a FOOL could believe the HUMAN EYE could evolve ! Not only can we see in 3D and moving pictures but also we can detect a 1000 shades of GREEN and every other color to enable us to fully appreciate the colors of God's Creation. The MOON alas is only 50 shades of GRAY ! Thanks for visiting ~ A Rainbow of Love to All ~ BRIAN XOX
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A descriptive rainbow and love the pyjallmas even though I don't wear them !1
Thanks for your reply Michael ~ too much information ! My MUM told me never to go to bed au natural ~ 'cos the might be a FIRE ! BRIAN
I just wear boxer shorts so no need to worry Brian.
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A veritable bouquet of colour to your lovely day Brian. - those jammys sound chic with their purple stripes.
Thanks FAY ~ even though I'm a SERF at work ~ I like to be KING in bed ~ Yours KING BEE !
Very warm and full of brilliance Brian!
Thanks HONEY ~ it is SATURDAY soi thought I would inject a bit of color & humor into MPS ! Rainbow Hugs ~ BRIAN
A very colorful write
Thanks Tony ~ pleased it appealed to your PALETTE ! BRIAN
Welcome
Good colourful write.
Thanks HONEY ~ I love rainbows and all colors and shades ! A rainbow hug for You ~ Yours BRIAN
I haven't seen a rainbow in a while. Cool pajamas! Love your poem. Also love your authors notes. Our color vision truly is a gift from God and to appreciate the things he has given us. Wonderful job! Hugs-Christina
Love your comments CHRIS ~ You are always on my wavelength ! Never ever take color for granted ! Rainbow Hugs ~ BRIAN
What better way to start a good morning by reading a colorful good read .
Thanks WOLF ~ peased it woke you up for colourful Saturday ! Yours BRIAN
Love this love colours x
Thanks MARIEANNE ~ pleased you enjoyed the colours ~ they alkways stir my muse ! Hugs BRIAN
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