Yellowness.
With each advent of sun-showered lemon
wonderment happens,
a springing of close-coloured denseness
floods valley and field.
Local daffodil time opens frilly with captured
scents of happiness,
jam-packed with massed heads all nodding
welcome gilt greetings.
A yearly looked-for experience is this, so
breathing in sunshine
under blue sky I bend down to eye level,
and lie alongside an ocean
of yellowness wealth to feel floral motion
of therapy's finest.
To be momentarily floating atop flittering
waves of essence
is like swimming in Spring-coloured bliss.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: April 4th, 2017 04:55
- Comment from author about the poem: I actually do this every year weather permitting and the feeling of being one with this vivid colour is astounding. - Bluebells too invite me to get down and breather in the therapy of being at one with blueness.
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Comments9
Captured scents of happiness.
What a wonderdul image beautifully put.
More summery than my lastest posting.
Bless you Garry - go glad you enjoyed those moments of yellowy happiness my poem tried to describe.
Well written and expressed Great write
Thanks FAY ~ Nothing stirs the muse quite like a "Host of Golden Daffodils" Thanks for caring and sharing. My poem (and Fusion) today is about the equally beautiful NORTHERN RED CARDINAL ~ Yours B
Beautiful write. May you float in Spring as you do in these words.
Ah - what a wonderful wish in your kind comment Goldfinch - - pleased the read of Spring's yellowy gifts gave you a warm smile.
A fine write.
Fantastic, expressive poem. I can see the daffodils so clearly in my mind. Phil.G.
I am so pleased that the glorious yellow of my daffodil poem gave you a taste of what their essence en-masse did for me Phil. Thank you for your valued comment.
Ah what a lovely poem for a great flower. I currently have large trumpets, jonquils, split coronas, doubles, pink trumpeted, and miniature species all in bloom but they are about to go over now - but there is so much to follow and look forward to.
Stunning pic to go with your well written poem. Absolutely loved reading it. Spring is just coming to where I live. Great job!
Thank you dear Christina and friends for your valued comments on this tribute to Spring's lovely gifts.
BIG SMILE...
Thank you
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