BINDING VOWS
Hooded.
Wooded.
Seeing.
Fleeing.
He once had planted the binding vows
and now sought passage through sweeping boughs.
Michael Edwards © April 2017
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- Published: April 8th, 2017 00:09
- Comment from author about the poem: This one is a Tyburn - yet another new form for me - I enjoy these short ones just playing with words. Also a break from my own tradition today, and especially for WriteBeLight, a photo of a corner of my garden taken last June - it's a wall-enclosed garden as many are in the villages - I'll post another in the coming week.
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Good write.
Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!
Thick gloves and a big bin then.
Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a "Tale in the Sting !" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !
I'm going to copyright it - thanks Brian.
Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author's comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!
Thanks WBL - it was my pleasure as is reading your poems which always help lift the spirit. Our weather is lovely and warm (shirt sleeve weather) and off to cut the grass for the fourth time this year so far
Have a great day and thanks again! So kind of you. I get the same feeling from your paintings and work 🙂
Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I'll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.
Tea and scones with fresh strawberry jam and cream - you'd be welcome anytime.
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