Goldfinch60

Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.

Once more My River called;

By its side I walked and dreamed.

The pigeons were there,

There in abundance.

Watching me walk,

Walk through their domain,

Flying up to the trees

As I approached them.

Then the dream struck me,

What if I could fly with them

And fly into the sky,

Away from the ills of this earth,

Dreaming of places of peace and wonder.

I was pulled back,

Realising that at this moment there was peace,

Peace and wonder in my life

As I walked with My River.

Gently, quietly, in harmony

In harmony with both My River

And My Spirit.

My Spirit that was always with me,

But so much more apparent

As I walked by My River.

I passed a large growth of nettles

But there in their centre,

The wonder of Nature was shown

Three beautiful daffodils shone,

Shone in the sunlight,

Showing me that even in tragedy

Wonder and beauty can shine through.

Comments10

  • orchidee

    Good write. I saw a daffodil growing in a compost heap. Not a huge heap of manure, as it was in our garden!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, use your compost wisely.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Such an upbeat feel of positive vibes in this poem my friend.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fay, I always try to look for the positive in life.

      • Michael Edwards

        Great positive message. Not only in nature but also in cities - I love to look up and see the brilliant architecture we have - and then when I look down and see everyone else walking along looking blankly straight ahead or even down at the ground quite oblivious of what is there.

        • Goldfinch60

          I too look up, even in nature there is so much to see but many people just do not look. Thank you Michael.

        • P.H.Rose

          Really lovely poem
          Those where you
          Think I'm them
          I find really remarkable
          I've woke up with poem
          in my head from that
          Type of dream...
          Well done GF60

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you PH.

            • P.H.Rose

              Sorry it was supposed to
              Say those where your
              Thinking in them

            • WriteBeLight

              Very beautiful walk Goldfinch!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you WBL much appreciated.

              • willyweed

                I love a good dream poem just like this one. well done sir!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you WW, much appreciated.

                • lovelydarkanddeep

                  Beautifully worded and uplifting.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you very much LDAD, much appreciated.

                  • Tony36

                    Well written and expressed Great write, true beauty can be found in some of the oddest places

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So very true, nature especially can always surprise us. Thank you Tony.

                      • Tony36

                        Welcome

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        O for the wings ~ For the wings of a Dove ~ Far far away would I fly ! We all long to join the birds BROTHER ! Nettles can be a bit touchy ~ BUT ~ Daffs in the Nettle Patch also causes me joy ! Thanks for caring BRIAN.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you for your wonderful comment Brian.

                        • magenta1

                          Great write!

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Thank you M. Much appreciated.



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