OUR INNER BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

IS YOUR CHARACTER AS BEAUTIFUL AS YOUR APPEARANCE ?

 

OUTER BEAUTY is an obsession 

Upmarket clothes and cosmetics

Really cool and sophisticated appearance !

 

I want to look and smell good

Nobody wants to be ostracised

Nobody wants to offend others

Everybody wants to be accepted ~ so we

Readily conform to Custom and Fashion

 

BUT ~ do we spend our time & money on

Externals and neglect our Character ? Am I

A HEDONIST obsessed with pleasure and beauty ?

Unfortunately it is easy to focus on externals and

To neglect our INNER BEAUTY ~ to SPRAY but not PRAY 

YOU know yourself ~ do you need to refocus ?

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Hugs to all BRIAN

 

We need to have more balance in each of our lives !

A balance between our outward appearance and our

Inner Character. Do you think we are more concerned 

with how we look (external) than how we act (inner) ?

 

This poem is an Acrostic 3~5~6 Sonnet ~ OK

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 11th, 2017 02:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: In the WEST the 21st C is increasingly HEDONISTIC ! We value Pleasure and outward Appearance above Spiritual Values ! Good looks are more valued than good living. As in everything we need to be balanced and in equilibrium. We should spend as much time and money on developing our inner character (Love ~ Joy ~ Peace ~ Patience ~ Gentleness ~ Goodness ~ Faithfulness ~ Humility and Self Control) and helping others as we do on our appearance and clothing ~ a balance of inner and outer beauty ! Comments welcome ~ Love and Peace to All ~ BRIAN XOX
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  • Garry

    Nicely said.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks GARRY pleased you appreciated it ~ BRIAN

    • Fay Slimm.

      So much truth in these wise suggestions my friend.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks FAY ~ you always display "inner beauty" in your poems and your comments ! I knew you would approve of the concept of balancing our inner and outer beauty I Yours B

      • Michael Edwards

        Great message well put.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks MICHAEL ~ it is also a message to myself to be clean on both the "inside & outside" ~ Yours BRIAN.

        • WriteBeLight

          Agreed Brian!

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks HONEY ~ Love your approval for the equilibrium of our "inner & outer" beauty. Beautiful Hugs ~ BRIAN

          • willyweed

            nice work and so true

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks WILLY ~ For ones wee ode to be considered both nice and true ~ is praise indeed ~ Yours BRIAN !

            • lovelydarkanddeep

              True words.

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks ANGEL ~ pleased you enjoyed it ~ Hugs BRIAN

              • Tony36

                Sad, but true, great write

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Yes indeed TONY ~ The increasing hedonistic character is sad ~ BUT ~ each one of us can make a difference ~ every blessing ~ BRIAN

                  • Tony36

                    Welcome

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you for writing this! I have seen the most breathtakingly beautiful people be so ugly on the inside. Your poem is spot on. Lets just say my life and those that i keep close are well balanced. Really great topic! Hugs-Christina

                    • BRIAN & ANGELA

                      Thanks CHRIS ~ I know you are balanced ~ inside and out ~ that is what makes you SPECIAL. We should all care for our outer appearance ~ we don't want to frighten the Children ! However it is the IN & OUT balance that is the key to being a balanced person and a a good Christian Witness ! Balanced HUGS ~ BRIAN.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Good write and well said. Our inner selves show our beauty.

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        Thanks BROTHER It is the balance of OUTER respectability and INNER responsibility that is important ! Thanks for your comments ~ BRIAN

                      • Elizabeth

                        this is sad but it is very true... Great write.

                        • BRIAN & ANGELA

                          Thanks ELIZABETH ~ I agree ~ SAD but TRUE. The important thing for Men as well as Ladies ~ is to be well groomed and as smart as we are financially able ~ but our outward appearance to be balanced by a smart and well groomed CHARACTER ! Our attitude should always be as "GOOD" (or even "BETTER" !) than our appearance ~ Yours BRIAN



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