Fay Slimm.

We Deserve It.

We Deserve It.

Yes let's colour our hair.
Choose clothes with care.
Eat the right food.
We deserve to look good.

Let's be young for our age.
Get to like central stage.
Fix on a wide smile.
We deserve all this style.

But let's venture inside.
Look at hurt we all hide.
Sad minds need some aid. 
We deserve these re-made.

Let's look deeper and start.
View our make-over heart.
Let's not settle for show.
We are worth it you know.

It makes sense to forgive.
To live - - and let live,
Pride we need re-defined.
We deserve hearts that shine.

Let us work inside-out.
Learn what freedom's about.
Facing self creates change.        
And we deserve to feel great.


  • elsiewarrenswords

    nice 🙂

  • P.H.Rose

    I love this Fay
    It's exactly how I
    Feel we should all
    Start the change
    From within
    To much is put
    On the way we look
    And not how we

  • Michael Edwards

    Goes well with Brians posting today - another great message Fay.

  • WriteBeLight

    Love that Fay! It is like a morning prayer!

  • kevin browne

    you deserve a whopping great big well done for writing this poem. keep the standard going.

  • willyweed

    I think this is great Fay our inner being celebrated our spirit unmasked

  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed Great write

  • orchidee

    A fine write.

  • MendedFences27

    Yeah, let's all make over our hearts. Let's lose the greed, the lust for power, and the selfishness.Your message is a great way to live. If we all lived by it , what a wonderful world it would be. Loved the thoughts in this poem. -Phil A


    Thanks FAY ~ It is interesting that your poem today mirrors the one I wrote about Inner and Outer Beauty ! Thanks for your encouraging comment ~ Perhaps GOD has a message for us all today about maintaining the equilibrium of our Inside & Outside display of Beauty ! Thanks for caring & sharing a very beautiful and timely poem ! Yours B. Love the visual and the message !

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write Fay, one day all will come to be free.

  • Pintu Mahakul

    Beautiful rhyme poem shared. We need to decorate life and style. We need to decorate mind with wisdom. Yes, we deserve to look good from inside and as well as from outside. We deserve for shiny hearts. We ever feel great with freedom. An excellent poem is shared.

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