Feathers.

Goldfinch60

We talk often of feathers in our caps

When we have achieved something,

But I now have a feather in my hand,

A quill to write down those achievements.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 18th, 2017 01:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: I do calligraphy as a hobby and when my younger Granddaughter came back from a break in France she bought me a quill as gift.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
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Comments9

  • orchidee

    Oh yes, we both had them at school, didn't we, millions of years ago? Well, around 1066 anyway. Did you get a quill from that pterodactyl?! Good write.

    • Goldfinch60

      That pterodactyl you kept as a pet? It would let me near it as it thought I was after your pork pies!!

    • Garry

      Well done. A fine example of the classic 4-liner. A much underated form. Certainly not enough of them on MPS.
      Short, vivid and creates an image in very few words.

    • Michael Edwards

      Yes I enjoyed this - well written.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks ANDY ~ A quintisensial quatrain and a perfect picture ~ thanks. If you voice be silences ~ then let you quill quiver with indignation ! BRIAN

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Brian, much appreciated.

      • willyweed

        nice style to this one GF.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you WW.

      • WriteBeLight

        Nice little write Goldfinch!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you WBL.

      • official1sp

        I salute you for your tenacity of purpose and outstanding leadership qualities. Thank you for your words of encouragement and support. I will remain forever grateful for your contributions to literature.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you as well Lamar, all I do is write words from my mind and spirit.

          • official1sp

            Therefore welcome one another as Christ has welcomed you, for the glory of God.
            Romans 15:7



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