Michael Edwards

ALONE

 

 

ALONE

 

 

She

was

alone

in the house

lit just by fire glow

as she sat erect on the chair

with whitened hands gripping the linen skirt which she wore

as she sat erect on the chair

lit just by fire glow

in the house

alone

was

she.

 

 

Comments8

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write, it works very well.

  • Hopey_xx

    A very nice picture and poem!

  • Garry

    Very cleved and works very well.

  • orchidee

    Yes, well-thought out poem and nice pic!

  • WriteBeLight

    Haunting write Michael, but a comforting painting.

  • willyweed

    nicely done Michael

  • ephraim crud

    very cleverly done Michael. not as easy as they look, as well i know.
    painting is superb too!

  • BRIANSODES

    Thanks MICHAEL for a perfect "Diamond shaped Reverse Poem ~ also a very intriguing content ! And the water colour is a perfect compliment to FADED ELEGANCE sitting ALONE ! Yours BRIAN

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Brian - took quite q while to write this - a real challenge.



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