willyweed

painted pony

I rode a painted pony

to try to get a thrill

 

all for love and glory

into the battle of the will

 

engaged in battle furious

I tried to meet your needs

 

I was only curious

to know if I could bleed

 

I rode a painted pony

and we went 'round and 'round

 

you poked me with your jousting lance

and knocked me on the ground

 

and I saw the painted herd

was moving up and down

Comments9

  • orchidee

    Good write.

    • willyweed

      Thank you for the read and comment I appreciate it much!

    • Michael Edwards

      Love it Willy well crafted and so original.

      • willyweed

        Thank You Michael glad you liked it.

      • Tony36

        Great write my friend

        • willyweed

          Thank you Tony I appreciate that.

          • Tony36

            You are welcome

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Ah yes WILLY ~ I remember it well
            The thrill and the spill
            of the CAROUSEL !

            Happy Horsin' Around ~ BRIAN

            • willyweed

              Oh E knew ya would Brian me lad!

            • WriteBeLight

              A very merry go round with words WW.

              • willyweed

                round and round she goes.... thanks WBL

              • Hopey_xx

                Great write!

              • Diamond

                Nothing​ stopped right.... I can understand and relate to this so much. A beautiful poem, simple words and deep. I also love the image.

                • willyweed

                  Thank You Diamond I like that picture too!

                • notapoet

                  Clever write WW, loved it!

                  • willyweed

                    Thank You notapoet, I appreciate the read!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very good write with great imagery.

                    • willyweed

                      Thank You GF, for sure!



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