painted pony

willyweed

I rode a painted pony

to try to get a thrill

all for love and glory

into the battle of the will

engaged in battle furious

I tried to meet your needs

I was only curious

to know if I could bleed

I rode a painted pony

and we went 'round and 'round

you poked me with your jousting lance

and knocked me on the ground

and I saw the painted herd

was moving up and down

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Comments +

orchidee April 21st, 2017 10:15
Good write.
- willyweedApril 21st, 2017 10:38
  Thank you for the read and comment I appreciate it much!
Michael Edwards April 21st, 2017 10:16
Love it Willy well crafted and so original.
- willyweedApril 21st, 2017 10:42
  Thank You Michael glad you liked it.
Tony36 April 21st, 2017 10:21
Great write my friend
- willyweedApril 21st, 2017 10:43
  Thank you Tony I appreciate that.
- Tony36April 22nd, 2017 19:21
  You are welcome
BRIAN & ANGELA April 21st, 2017 11:32
Ah yes WILLY ~ I remember it well
The thrill and the spill
of the CAROUSEL !

Happy Horsin' Around ~ BRIAN
- willyweedApril 21st, 2017 12:32
  Oh E knew ya would Brian me lad!
WriteBeLight April 21st, 2017 13:35
A very merry go round with words WW.
- willyweedApril 21st, 2017 13:47
  round and round she goes.... thanks WBL
Hopey_xx April 21st, 2017 14:45
Great write!
notapoet April 21st, 2017 20:41
Clever write WW, loved it!
- willyweedApril 22nd, 2017 07:30
  Thank You notapoet, I appreciate the read!
Goldfinch60 April 22nd, 2017 00:22
Very good write with great imagery.
- willyweedApril 22nd, 2017 07:31
  Thank You GF, for sure!

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