Michael Edwards






Look after your cash.

Shampoo has to be purchased

Real poo bears no cost.


He needs a hot bath

Can dry ice be liquefied?

Will it make him wet? 


Tap water is fee.

People buy water from shops.

Some people are dim.








  • Goldfinch60

    Good fun write with many truths in it.

    Good picture, where is it?

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Goldfinch - the picture is of Nettuno in Italy and now resides in the building on the right hand side.

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic.


      Thanks MICHAEL ~ nice to be back on the Poetic track ! Love the visual ~ Italy is almost as photogenic as Lancashire ! When GOD created planet Earth he assured there was more than enough water ~ Lake Windermere for each of the 7.5 billion Humans ~ and like the Air we breath it is in essence FREE ! Brian ~ Please check my Water Poem ! Love yours !

    • WriteBeLight

      Very sarcastic in a way. But, great message. Some people in the U.S. are dumb with their money, and time, as well. Very excellent art, as usual, very talented poet!

    • orchidee

      A fine write lol. Yet we have to pay rates, so maybe it is 'Tap water is fee'! (stet). Unless of course we're drinking someone else's water. The it's free for us!

    • Garry

      Veey good.

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