I was afraid I would ever meet someone like him again.
He infected my thoughts and left me disorientated.
He made me insomnious.
He purged my daydreams and left me feeling emptier than the atoms in his heart, He let me sob and let the pillows absorb the liquid agony.
He created the agony, the kind that felt like a black hole in my chest.
He polluted my sense.
He shattered my heart into tiny pieces and left me unable to feel a thing. I was hypnotised, blind, lied to and decieved,
I wish I'd took care, i wish I'd not let him in.
I regret it
I regret it
I regret it,
And then i met HIM, the one.
The one who loves me in the way the sun sets between the mountains,
how he opened up to me as the vibrant red sky turned to musky grey and let me see him for who he really was,
how he made me become more softer, less violent.
More like the shore taking everything as it came, and less like the ocean crashing against everything that stood in its way.
The one who has made me love in a way i have never loved before.
Its different, but new. And better. A lot better.
The one that made me realise love is not supposed to be arguments and alone souls.
The one that taught me love shouldn't be is my heart feeling raw.
It shouldn't be my screams echoing through the walls because i was burning alive at seeing you in the halls.
He, he taught me that.
He taught me love.
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WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ which I love ! It explores the AGONY and ECSTASY of love but leaves us on Love's High Ground. Most of us have experienced the HI's & LO's of Love ~ so we can emphasise. I have had one GF who sucked me dry physically and emotionally and left me withered and empty ~ but my current GF takes me into a Seventh Heaven of LOVE. My MUM taught me to respect Ladies and treat them very very gently so I can identify with your second verse and your Perfect Man ! The tragedy is your first experience turned you against us ~ which is sad ~ because (as you have now discovered) we can be lovely. The sad thing is most relationships start off well but some become beastly after just a few weeks. I am pleased you have now found TRUE LOVE ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN. Loved your Song ! Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
Great work. Welcome to the site. I myself have learned a key thing from this site, and that's: Read other poet's work! If you seek improvement, the way to do so is to delve into the works of others. It opens your eyes and helps you discover what you are capable of. Just remember not to change anything if you don't like the change! I enjoyed your piece, and hope to read more! ~
Good write, the right one is always there for us. Welcome to MPS.
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