BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

 

BOTTLES  of Beer and Bottles of Milk

BOTTLES  of Hand Lotion ~ smooth as silk

BOTTLES  of Water you buy at the Station

BOTTLES  of Water ~ prevent dehydraration

BOTTLES  of Sauce in the Geasy Spoon Caff

BOTTLES  of  Balsamic ? Don't make me laff

BOTTLES  of perfume on my Girlfriends dresser

BOTTLES  of aftershave ~ just to impress 'er

BOTTLES  of Pills ~ that you take every day

BOTTLES  of Uppers & Downers ~ OK 

BOTTLES  of Wine ~ when we dine "On the Cart"

BOTTLES  RED (meat) WHITE (fish) ~ I'm gastronomic SMART

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX

 

This Poem is presented as an ANAPHORA in which each line

begins with the same WORD ~ rather like a LITANY. It is an

Elizabethan (1st) form and can be sung to Plain Chant ~ OK  

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 15th, 2017 03:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: Every year we use billions of BOTTLES ~ Worldwide ! Most of these are NOT recycled and end up polluting the land and sea..Broken glass is a hazard to Humans & Animals ! Enjoy your tipple ~ but please please don't lose your BOTTLE ~ RECYCLE Comment welcome ~ Thanks for reading ~ please comment ~ Love BRIAN XOX
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  • kevin browne

    this reminds me of a homeless man who started to build round houses for other homeless people out of plastic bottles. a scheme has now been made up to keep the work going. good work BRIANSODES,

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks for your comment KEVIN ~ A very apposite use of recycled plastic bottles ~ Yours Brian

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write and good reminder.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Tanks ANDY ~ Pleased you liked it ! We all need to be more GREEN ~ Yours BRIAN

      • swingline

        I'm glad your angst is not bottled up . You've cut them off at the bottle neck . Now that they have bottle bottom from too much cake . Your broken bottle diplomacy was from too much shake . Soon the Earth will be one big bottle dome . So raise you drink it's bottle up .

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          HI SL ~ CONFUCIUS ~ He say ~ Better to drink beer straight from Bottle ~ saves water ~ glasses ~ soap and you can't dribble from a bottle ! BRIAN

          • swingline

            Ha ha , LOL , thanks for the good laugh .

          • orchidee

            Made me think - an AMPHORA is a kind of bottle too. I was around ages ago when they invented them - so I say, in my pretence for being millions of years old! Oh vanity - it's so no-one guesses my real age! A fine write B.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks ANDY ~ WORDS ARE WONDERFUL ! An AMHORA is a Grecian Urn for holing wine an ANAPHORA is also a Greek word and it mans CARRYING BACK ~ The poetic implication is the the first word of the last line is "carried back to each preceding line ! The Greeks always have a word for it ~ BRIAN

            • Christina8

              You always amaze me with the new forms of poetry that you come up with! I always enjoy when they rhyme. Fantastic job! I'm a recycle nut so I hope all my bottles are being reused somehow. Great poem! Hugs-Christina

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks CHRIS ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! Rhyme is important help the flow when you recite. ANAPHORA poems are common in spiritual chants etc and are lovely ~ Hugs for you too BRIAN

              • Michael Edwards

                And yet another new form to have a go at - good one B.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks MICHAEL ~ My role on MPS is to Entertain ~ Enlighten ~ Educate ~ ANAPHORA verse was common slightly before your time (Elizabethan !) there are many examples in Gregorian Chants and Shakespeare etc ~ BRIAN

                • WriteBeLight

                  Bottles of great rhyme Brian!

                • Mandi

                  So true, RECYCLE! Lol I always save my glass bottles and reuse them for whatever or turn them into potions for my Halloween witch station😅. I have so many my mom tells me I'm crazy, but always gives me some really neat shaped ones when ever she can. Love the rhyme, love this poem!

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    OOOOOOOOOO MANDI ~ Love to see your Halloween Witch Station ~ sounds spooky ! MOMs are a great source of Bottles and everything ! Bottles (epecially GLASS) are awesome and i save my WINE BOTTLES for the ART CLASS ! Pleased you liked the Poem ~ Yours BRIAN



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