Troublesome love . . .
will not let you sleep . . .
Sort of like a basketball game . . .
Questions are bounced mad and furiously against the hardwood floor with only more questions bouncing back
Meanwhile someone is trying to steal your dreams causing you to twist and turn distorting your image
And you fight your way down the court of life and toss your hopes and dreams into the air and pray to God . . . go in
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Author:
swingline (Pseudonym) (
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Do like the format of this - it made me read it several times and it got better on every reading.
Thank you Michael for reading and I hope you liked the music . I loved the comment .
..Thanks STEVEN ~ I played and reffed a lot of BASKETBALL in my 20's and it is perfect analogy. However many times you score a basket ~ eacn new game starts form scratch ~ so you can never taken anything for granted ! Thanks for sharing "Closing my Eyes" by FM ~ great song ~ great group ! Yours BRIAN
Thank you Brian for the read and comment into your past . Most appreciated .
A fine write S.
Thank you orchidee for your time .
Go in indeed. Good write.
Thank you Goldfinch60 for your reading and nice comment .
I enjoyed your poem;it's very reflective.
Thank you Rodriguez for reading .
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