You know in my eyes you
can see it--the fear.
The pleading for help
and anxiety sincere.
For so many reasons I need
your reassuring hand.
Sometimes I feel like I'm
stuck in emotional quicksand.
Just need you by my side
please don't go run and hide.
Fear dreams keeping me up at night,
Stay by my side during my plight.
I love you for being here
and for promising to stay near.
Because you know in my eyes you
can see it--the fear.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 27th, 2017 01:08
- Comment from author about the poem: Written during a time I was having a problem with anxiety but it's under control now. My husband is awesome. He liked this poem but happier poems from now on. Feels great to be back on MPS!
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Comments10
And great to have you back especially with this gem.
Thank you so much! I do appreciate the comment!
This was well worth the wait
Just beautiful chrissy,
But don't make it so
Long next time....
I just have a lot going on. Maybe I'll write a poem it... Thanks so much PH!!
Good write, I am glad things are now under control and you are moving forward.
Thanks, I'm much better now. I appreciate your comment!
Thanks CHRIS ~ I feel much happier now you have broken the ICE and perhaps you could add another SENSE (a sense of JOY) to my (con)FUSION ? God had been so so good to you in sending you the Perfect Husband ~ Cherish the LOVE ! Looking forward to tomorrows poem ~ hope I'm not being too greedy ? love the structure of today's and fully understand the ANGST of the Subject ~ time to move on and upwards ~ AMEN ~ Poetic Hugs for my fave Lady on MPS ~ Brother BRIAN
I really appreciate your long thought out comment. When you wanted me to add a sense I literally picked one of the five, now I realize there are many. So I will try my my best!! Poetic hugs for a dear friend---Christina
Anxiety sucks! It's life debilitating. I hope you are doing okay and hey it's amazing tou have someone to keep you safe. Cherish him 💓
Yes I am doing much better now. I do cherish my husband. Thanks so much for reading my poem!
Well written and expressed
Thanks Tony!
Welcome
Nice write
Thanks! I appreciate that!
A fine write C.
Thank you for your kind comment!
Thank you for a very beautiful and emotional poem. We writers should be grateful that we are able to express our feelings. So many people out there are not able to do that and do have a much harder time.
I know, I thank you for such a great comment. I found some of my other writes "forced" so thats why I chose this one. Again, much appreciated!
Will share this with people I know 😉
Reflection really helps
Great to go with the flow
I dealt with mine by listening to the dog. TRUTH!
I so much appreciate your feedback on this poem and also that you saved it as a favorite! Thanks again!
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