THE WIND BLOWS
The wind blows outside.
It rarely blows in our house.
We do not like it.
We do not often eat beans.
Beans prove wind can be broken.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of nonsense in a sort of tanka style
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This nonsense gave me a good wee hours giggle!
Thanks Heather
Oh lol, fine write and pic M.
Good fun write and cartoon.
Thanks MICHAEL for pic & poem ! It's an ill wind that blows nobody no good ! BRIAN Pleas check my TANKAS and new FUSION on TIPPLE ~ Thanks B
Ta muchly Brian.
Sorry Michael, love the drawing better than the poem, even though the poem is really good!
Yes not one of my best but wanted to write in Tanka style which is a bit restrictive.
What a pleasant way to start a day, reading your clever little poem! Thank you for this one, Michael. And I love the cartoon as well!
Thanks so much Louis
LOL, great write
Thanks Tony
Welcome
'Gad sir, did u fart?'
'Of course i did - you don't think i always smell like this do you?'
Gave me a chuckle - thanks b-e
Toot? That's more to do with a car horn in the UK, I think! I shall have to swoon - bit windy! lol.
Or trump - also an apt name for an obnoxious airbag.
Great fun. It reminded me of 'Silly Verse for Kids' by Spike Milligan.
Ah Spike - I guess you are a Brit - despite his acclaim I still feel he was underrated as a (silly) poet. I love his:
The boy stood on the burning deck when all but he had fled
Twit!
He had a very quirky sense of humour. On his gravestone is the inscription ' I told you I was ill' - he certainly had the last laugh, as we over the pond say!
Very funny
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