Not Again.
Never will sighs go so deeply again.
Go tell the sea that he,
who was the life of my flame, strong
Knight who took me riding
behind his first steering of kindness
into the power of desire,
can no longer move distance to prove
love's tides can reach me
for he has passed the last fatal flood
where void and troubleless
is he but my lament on losing such
lover will never be ending
for not again will pain dig so deeply
inside my heart's core.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: July 4th, 2017 02:05
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Comments11
This is beautiful Fay - thank you.
Thank you my friend.
Lovely Fay.
Glad you dropped by and enjoyed the read Frank.
Faye,
first of all, where do you get these beautiful pictures?
Second, your poem is so well written, I read it over and over again.
Hi Fred - Will send you a message to try and explain how I get pics. Thanks a lot for your lovely comment - so glad you enjoyed the verse.
Yes, no pain digs deeper into our heart's core than losing one's lover, as you so eloquently express herein. Thank you for sharing this beauty, Fay.
Your summary hits home Louis - the pain of lost love is one of the worst.
Well written and expressed
Thank you Tony - - pleased you found something of value in this sad story.
Welcome
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ but ~ in its own way ~ so so sad. The secret of your Beauty & Grace FAY is that you have NO regrets ! You also have thousands of wonderful memories which you can recall to lift your spirit in times of loneliness. Additionally your Faith assures you ~ that you will be reunited in GLORY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
Having known love how can we regret dear Brian - love lights our way forward when we feel lonely and faith makes us look to the future with anticipation. Thanks a load for your lovely comment.
Thoughtful write Fay.
Thank you for sharing
I could offer many words
But I'll truly take a moment
And just breathe.
Thank you again
Another beautiful write Fay.
Well wrote. I loved it. I thought my poems was good but after reading yours there buying compared to how you write. Wow this is deep and lovely. Nice job. Hope to read more by you. Drop by and read some of mine. Tell me what you think
Thank you for the invite Krystal - I look forward to reading your work here on MPS and am so pleased you enjoyed the verse above - will visit you page really soon.
Although this poem smacks of hurt, beauty nevertheless still sits comfortably upon your page.....
Neville
Yes beauty when once taken root still wins the day Nev.............. thanks a load for reviewing this oldie........................... have a good Sunday my friend.
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