THROUGH THE NIGHT
Through the night
within the room in which they stayed
through the night.
The candle shed its wavering light
upon the bed in which they laid
as curtains by the window swayed
through the night.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: July 5th, 2017 01:38
- Comment from author about the poem: Another attempt at a classic form plus one of my watercolours.
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Thanks MICHAEL ~ once again a great symbiosis (good word) of Poem & Picture ~ ALL THU THE NIGHT ! Pleas check my Poem & Fusion ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian.
Super write.
Very good painting as well.
Pleased you like them. 🙂
A fine write and pic M. Yep, a good symbi-wotsit! Oh, I must learn some more long words! heehee.
And now the hymn: 'All through the night' Meoowwoo. I've started singing it!
Simbiosis - rhymes with pick noses (well almost!) Ar hyd y nos
Love the feel of these secretive lines Michael and love the cloud-mass in your beautiful watercolour. Hhmmm what do they say about poetic minds thinking alike - today I have posted a verse about Cloud. Strange eh ?
Thank you Fay - yes just read yours and what a super posting.
Just to get it out of the way: Your watercolor is incredible!
Now to your writing. Superb, it engaged me and now I want to know what happened in that bed!!!!
I should have installed a spy cam - thanks for your very generous comments.
An fine artist and poet! What Alfred said. Im awfully intrigued too. Part 2 part 2 *chants * haha
Ah - you've gotta wait - thanks for lookin' in.
Written another stanza so tomorrow...! Plus a minor amendment to this one to adhere to the rondelet format.
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