Michael Edwards

THROUGH THE NIGHT

 

 

THROUGH THE NIGHT

 

Through the night

within the room in which they stayed

through the night.

The candle shed its wavering light

upon the bed in which they laid

as curtains by the window swayed

through the night.

 

 

Comments6

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks MICHAEL ~ once again a great symbiosis (good word) of Poem & Picture ~ ALL THU THE NIGHT ! Pleas check my Poem & Fusion ~ BRIAN

  • Goldfinch60

    Super write.

    Very good painting as well.

  • orchidee

    A fine write and pic M. Yep, a good symbi-wotsit! Oh, I must learn some more long words! heehee.
    And now the hymn: 'All through the night' Meoowwoo. I've started singing it!

    • Michael Edwards

      Simbiosis - rhymes with pick noses (well almost!) Ar hyd y nos

    • Fay Slimm.

      Love the feel of these secretive lines Michael and love the cloud-mass in your beautiful watercolour. Hhmmm what do they say about poetic minds thinking alike - today I have posted a verse about Cloud. Strange eh ?

      • Michael Edwards

        Thank you Fay - yes just read yours and what a super posting.

      • FredPeyer

        Just to get it out of the way: Your watercolor is incredible!
        Now to your writing. Superb, it engaged me and now I want to know what happened in that bed!!!!

        • Michael Edwards

          I should have installed a spy cam - thanks for your very generous comments.

        • Renzi

          An fine artist and poet! What Alfred said. Im awfully intrigued too. Part 2 part 2 *chants * haha

          • Michael Edwards

            Ah - you've gotta wait - thanks for lookin' in.

            • Michael Edwards

              Written another stanza so tomorrow...! Plus a minor amendment to this one to adhere to the rondelet format.



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