Can you see it?
Are you aware of it?
Can you answer questions
Before they are asked?
Can you see what will happen
Before it happens?
Many say they can.
Can you?
Can I?
Do you have feelings of dread,
Or feelings of joy,
Of events
That are about to happen?
If you do,
Or if I do,
Why can’t we change our world
So that we will be able to see it,
At peace,
And full of love,
Or cannot peace and love
Ever be foreseen.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: July 7th, 2017 01:37
- Comment from author about the poem: "Is there anybody there?"
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: niallprideaux
Comments9
A fine write G/F. I will believe in prophecy, but not clairvoyancy. It seems spooky to me. Who is Claire? Ms Voyancy? Me jokes get worse!
Thanks Orchi, are you sure they are not there, always look behind you.
I was there in 1066, saying 'cooeee'. Everyone wishes I was not there, cos I mucked it up for Harold!
we can work with the future but we cannot change it. no matter what we think, do, feel, or say. free will or not. we are not able to change the future
Very true Paul, we cannot change the past either. Thanks for your comment, much appreciated.
telepathical telepathic telepathy
telepathically telepathized
Nicely done!
Thank you PD.
Thanks ANDY we can only ponder ~ perceive and prophesy things as they where are and will be ! We cannot alter the Past or Present and we have to be realistic about our "Vision of the Future" Thanks for CARING ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian. May the future be bright.
I like that, makes you think. More fakes per half acre than anywhere else on the planet at a clairvoyants gala. Why don't clairvoyants get cheaper motor insurance?
Thanks b-e it amazes me when they turn up to a gala that has been postponed.
Ha ha ha that's funny mister. You made i larff!
I am glad about that laughing is nature's cure all.
I am with Orchi - when it comes to clairvoyancy but yes those moments of dread as to what the future holds are so poignant .
Thanks Michael but there are always those unexplained moments.
Love this poem! (I actually am psychic, so this is really awesome for me)
Thank you lg24, much appreciated.
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