You took me and my youth away
You stripped away my golden luster
You took something i could never get back
You framed me and you lied to me you left me for dead
You picked me up so high to only let me fall
You took away my control
You controled me
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Author:
ashleyT (
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- Comment from author about the poem: don't ever let someone control who you are and what you are about be your own person and live life the way you want to live it. You control your future.
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Welcome to the site Ashley!
A well written first poem. Hope to read a lot more from you!
thank you!
So now you are free to express yourself in your poetry. More please! I was reminded of a line from great lyricist Stevie Wonder "you took me riding in a rocket and gave me a star and then a half a mile from heaven you dropped me back down to this cold, cold world".
thank you so much
Well constructed with a great message and looking forward to more.
Good write. Welcome to MPS. I hope that you now have control of your life.
control yourself! beautifully written. don't fight to control yourself. do it and lay light on your mind.
WELCOME TO MPS ASHLEY Thanks for your first poem ~ well written but with a sad content ! CONTROL is bad and destructive and some Men relish it especially control over Lovely Young Ladies like you ~ paying that you have broken His despicable control ! In all my relationships with ladies I have shared 50 / 50 (Girl on Top !) and they have enjoyed their share of control in all things ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
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