Shore-Song.

Fay Slimm.

 

Shore-Song.

 

Ground shakes
as massive breakers force reverberation.

 

Blast booms,
rock face crash-cracks, creating spume.

 

Waves break
over fall's gradation as race accelerates.

 

Tidal sound
grinds into groundswell as din re-bounds.

 

Water weight
trapping soaked air roars in anticipation.

 

Before long
tide turns round for another shore-song.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 9th, 2017 01:47
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  • Michael Edwards

    Hear it, smell it, experience it - this says it all in a great atmospheric write.

  • FredPeyer

    You are saying in such a beautiful way what I experience nearly every time we go to the beach. And the picture is nice too. Thanks for another good one Fay!

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks FAY ~ living near the Coast is always a Blessing ~ Even the Essex ~ Suffolk Coast ! BUT to live near the Cornish Coast (as in your picture) and implied in your Poem is Paradise ! Blessings for SUNDAY ~ BRIAN

  • onepauly

    I find I can relate to the waves crashing for hours on you tube

    • Fay Slimm.

      Same here my friend - - waves and their power fascinate me. Pleased you enjoyed the read.

      • onepauly

        they also have streams flowing waterfalls raindrops I like them a lot.

      • Augustus

        You capture the excitement

      • Louis Gibbs

        I hear the sound your poem portrays so well, Fay. I can smell the salt air. I, too, live on a shore, but mine is sand rather than rock so the sound is muted. Oh well, I still appreciate it. Thanks for this fine post!

      • Heather T

        Sing to me all day, Ms. Fay...the song of nature's might in salt plumes from your pen.

      • Nicholas Browning

        Very interesting portrayal of one of nature's aspects. Nicely done as well.

      • Goldfinch60

        I hear the song that your words sing.



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