malubotelho

As sweet as ever

I had a dream, a dream of counting stars
On each star was a smile, or a blink of your eyes.
A soft and cheerful vision, as clear as the brilliant sky, a watercolor painted in dream, with fairy angels flying by.
I wanted to dream forever
as we danced on the scene
we and the angels together
but I walked from my dream.
A broken dream. However,
I saw you sleeping by my side
my thoughts were sweet as ever,
I knew that dream prove,
I was happy to be your bride.

Comments15

  • kevin browne

    you little smoothie. great poem for a great love whoever the person is x

    • malubotelho

      It is good like I say to unclutter the mind with the heavy stuff. I'm more to the smoothie side, really. As for the poem, yes I had a similar dream but I was a young creature flying into a lightened sky and was very beautiful. I created on top of it. I don't just write about my feelings but I'm a very imaginative person, so, sometimes I create personas with feelings of they own and I write about like I was into those personifications. I love to do that. Thanks for your comments.

    • burning-embers

      He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress last week (or was it a lion) but this is really sweet isn't it. This man is a very lucky person.

    • malubotelho

      Yes, I like that smoothie. Make me feel delicious. Soft and cream.
      I'm a lioness sometimes in motherhood protecting my cubs. My cubs are lions now and they want to protect me from the world now. Now they are the ones thinking I'm an innocent, ingĂȘnuos person. As for the dream, it was a beautiful dream. Was an enlighned vision and feelings flying light and free on that sky. I've felt so beautiful inside. I created on top to make it more interesting. Thanks, I appreciate your comments.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks MALU ~ for a perfect Love Poem ! I shared the dream and felt every nuance ~ Hugs BRIAN

      • malubotelho

        I say thanks for your lovely comments.

      • Michael Edwards

        Enjoyed this - so uplifting !!

        • malubotelho

          Thanks Michael. We need this sometimes.

        • Candlewitch

          dear malu,

          this is beautiful! I read your reply to kevin browne, and I just had to tell you that I love the dreams I have where I am flying!

          *hugs, Cat

          • malubotelho

            Yes, thank you. I love that too. One have the feeling of freedom and power. I used to have this kind of dream a lot when I was a teen and then long time I did not have one. This time was awesome and made me want to be there forever. I think if I had to die here to be there I would say yes at that moment and die as the happiest soul. I appreciate your comments.

          • FredPeyer

            Malu, very lovely "dreamlike" poem. I read your answer to kevin and I agree with you. Sometimes it is just us in the poem, sometimes part of it is us and part of it is imagination, and sometimes it is all imagination. But that is the beauty of writing.
            Well done, enjoyed it!

          • malubotelho

            Yes, I think to write imagination is primordial. With a good imagination one can create scenarios, emotions, smells and so on, for the readers. Thank you so much.

          • Cyprian Van Dyke

            Wow, this was beautiful. It had that dreamlike feeling throughout it and the ending made me realize the reason why. Beautiful poem! Tyfs!

            • malubotelho

              Thank you. Your comments are appreciated.

              • Cyprian Van Dyke

                You're most welcome! :)

              • Augustus

                I am hoping this is real but your notes in response seem otherwise. Nonetheless it is lovely. Would love to be the receiver of this poem.

                • malubotelho

                  Augustos, the dream happened and was beautiful but to write about it I had to fantasize on top. As for the lover, was my lover when I was only 24. Thank you so much for your comments

                • onepauly

                  very lovely poem

                  • malubotelho

                    Thank you my friend Pauly.

                  • Heather T

                    I love being happily lost in your reverie, Malu.

                    • malubotelho

                      The word reverie really translates this poem because I could not have a dream so perfect. It is a mix. The dream; the inspiration, the poem; the creation. Thanks for your comments

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Good loving write.

                      • malubotelho

                        Thanks my friend. Your comment is appreciated.

                      • ShannonXx

                        A beautiful write, love the feel of this work of art!

                        • malubotelho

                          Thank you Shannon. I appreciate your comments.

                        • Renzi

                          Beautiful. Just beautiful. My heart is warm 💓

                          • malubotelho

                            Thank you. I get happy if I can make others happy.



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