I had a dream, a dream of counting stars
On each star was a smile, or a blink of your eyes.
A soft and cheerful vision, as clear as the brilliant sky, a watercolor painted in dream, with fairy angels flying by.
I wanted to dream forever
as we danced on the scene
we and the angels together
but I walked from my dream.
A broken dream. However,
I saw you sleeping by my side
my thoughts were sweet as ever,
I knew that dream prove,
I was happy to be your bride.
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you little smoothie. great poem for a great love whoever the person is x
It is good like I say to unclutter the mind with the heavy stuff. I'm more to the smoothie side, really. As for the poem, yes I had a similar dream but I was a young creature flying into a lightened sky and was very beautiful. I created on top of it. I don't just write about my feelings but I'm a very imaginative person, so, sometimes I create personas with feelings of they own and I write about like I was into those personifications. I love to do that. Thanks for your comments.
He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress last week (or was it a lion) but this is really sweet isn't it. This man is a very lucky person.
Yes, I like that smoothie. Make me feel delicious. Soft and cream.
I'm a lioness sometimes in motherhood protecting my cubs. My cubs are lions now and they want to protect me from the world now. Now they are the ones thinking I'm an innocent, ingênuos person. As for the dream, it was a beautiful dream. Was an enlighned vision and feelings flying light and free on that sky. I've felt so beautiful inside. I created on top to make it more interesting. Thanks, I appreciate your comments.
Thanks MALU ~ for a perfect Love Poem ! I shared the dream and felt every nuance ~ Hugs BRIAN
I say thanks for your lovely comments.
Enjoyed this - so uplifting !!
Thanks Michael. We need this sometimes.
Malu, very lovely "dreamlike" poem. I read your answer to kevin and I agree with you. Sometimes it is just us in the poem, sometimes part of it is us and part of it is imagination, and sometimes it is all imagination. But that is the beauty of writing.
Well done, enjoyed it!
Yes, I think to write imagination is primordial. With a good imagination one can create scenarios, emotions, smells and so on, for the readers. Thank you so much.
Wow, this was beautiful. It had that dreamlike feeling throughout it and the ending made me realize the reason why. Beautiful poem! Tyfs!
Thank you. Your comments are appreciated.
You're most welcome! 🙂
I am hoping this is real but your notes in response seem otherwise. Nonetheless it is lovely. Would love to be the receiver of this poem.
Augustos, the dream happened and was beautiful but to write about it I had to fantasize on top. As for the lover, was my lover when I was only 24. Thank you so much for your comments
very lovely poem
Thank you my friend Pauly.
I love being happily lost in your reverie, Malu.
The word reverie really translates this poem because I could not have a dream so perfect. It is a mix. The dream; the inspiration, the poem; the creation. Thanks for your comments
Good loving write.
Thanks my friend. Your comment is appreciated.
A beautiful write, love the feel of this work of art!
Thank you Shannon. I appreciate your comments.
Beautiful. Just beautiful. My heart is warm 💓
Thank you. I get happy if I can make others happy.
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