Natures wash day..
Watching this view with a steering wheel obstruction.
A focus-less scene, as the rain beats on down.
Passing people stare, as I'm sat looking outward,
Wondering what I'm doing, sat out here in the rain.
I watch the trails, water drops down the windows,
Two racing each other, to see who will come first.
That sound on the roof, is almost as music,
So different each bar, as nature plays it's new song.
Still so much life, though this day seems so dreary,
Birds searching their next meal, as the rain pounds the ground.
Wind flowing through a tree, to me the branches are waving,
Such a sight I see, leaves me simply amazed.
If I hadn't been waiting, for a delivery this morning,
I would of missed this time, to view "Nature's wash day"..
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is another poem I Wrote whilst waiting in My car for a delivery at My daughters home... Was a wet dreary day But still so much life Can be seen.....
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A lovely slant on a not-so-lovely day! Thanks for sharing this view of nature's wash day with us, P.H..
Thank you Louis
An engaging read. Filling in time for a poet means looking around and you certainly did this to advantage P.H. - - hope the delivery came in the end.
It nearly did Fay, just 30 mins late.
Thank you for you lovely comment.
Beautiful poem you wrote while waiting for a delivery.....you definitely have a way with words! Great job!
Thank you Chrissy
Post a poem, I'd like
To read something
of yours
I'm trying to find something 'happy". So busy but will try to post one soon!
Most have done something similar but few observe their surroundings and even fewer record it in art or poetry.
Thank you so much Michael
That really made my day
That comment....
Good write, it is always amazing what you can see in nature in the strangest of environments.
Me to Gf60 me to..
Thank you...
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