Epiphany

malubotelho

My everyday side, lives.
My poetic side, vibrates.

  • Author: Malu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 14th, 2017 08:25
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: burning-embers
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  • Louis Gibbs

    A very good couplet, 'M'! I appreciate it, thanks for sharing. There definitely is a difference between just living, and vibrating.

    • malubotelho

      For sure it has a lot of difference. And when you are short of time to express yourself you must be precisely. Thanks for reading

    • burning-embers

      Perfect! +favs

      • malubotelho

        Thanks my friend. I've been kind of tight on time, so, this is as much as I can write today. Thanks for the contact.

        • burning-embers

          Two lines can say more than twenty. The message in these two lines is profound.

          • malubotelho

            Thank you. It truly is. Like I said before, when you are limited on time you must be precisely.

          • Michael Edwards

            Someone else posting a couplet - you've made my day especially since this little gem is special - more please.

          • malubotelho

            Thank you. It also refers to the MPS site. It vibrates with thoughts and energy of all kinds.

          • FredPeyer

            Malu, you said it all with so few words. We are all vibrating:
            According to string theory, absolutely everything in the universe—all of the particles that make up matter and forces—is comprised of tiny vibrating fundamental strings.
            On the everyday side these tiny vibrations let you live, while on the poetic side they let you create!
            You put the universe into two lines!

            • malubotelho

              Wow! Thank you. I'm flattened by your comment. I have to say that you said it all. Thanks for your words, just perfect.

            • Nicholas Browning

              Long live poetry!

              • malubotelho

                Thank you Nicholas. Comment appreciated.

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Excellent thought MALU ~ thanks for sharing.! My poetic side vibrates too ~ in harmony with all our lovely Members. Sharing and commenting on Poetry keeps me sane. Thanks for you feedback it maintains our Harmony ! Hugs BRIANi

              • malubotelho

                Thank you Brian. I'm a little late on feedbacks today. Did not even read the poems from all my friends. But the night is long and I will get there. Need some refreshment.

              • malubotelho

                Thanks a bunch. Yes, just a quick lovely one.

              • Heather T

                Profound, Malu! So much between the lines, and I know we all feel that.

              • Goldfinch60

                Vibrate away M, vibrate away.



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