The night could not sleep thinking about the next day.
When the day came the night was tired and went to bed.
The day was happy and made so much noise that awakened the night.
The night got out from her bed and shadowed the day creating an eclipse.
- The day got a bad humor and went to bed early.
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Malu (Pseudonym) (
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Early bird catches the worm, really liked this, thank you.
Thank you Dan. Just playing a bit.
Love it - did you know that Dawn wanted to go out with Sunset but they never met up.
How cute, right. Yes, I find that the best time of the day is when the day meets the night and they embrace each other. But then they say goodbye.
wonderfuly put. it makes ya think. horizens
Thanks Pauly. I appreciate you reading.
Thanks MALU ~ Night & Day are different but mutually exclusive. You can't have ONE with the OTHER. I prefer DAY because a more evil breed of Men & Women prefer the Darkness to the Light because their deeds are indeed evil ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN
Thank you Brian. I like the silence of the night to meditate.
Interesting story! Thank you for sharing it. 🙂
Thank you for reading my childish writing. I appreciate your comments.
Very cute and funny. Nearly sounds like a children's rhyme! Well done.
I would say it is like teenage thoughts. Fun
Just goes to show malu, that writers never grow up! 🙂
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Thank you Kat. It was a fun write.
Good write, each day comes and goes, the better the day the longer we would like it to be.
You can have a long day as long as you don't make too much noise. Thanks
Ian always quiet writing and reading poetry, maybe the odd sob or laugh.
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