take me down the mountain
onto the valley floor
take me down the mountain
I can't stay up here no more
high atop the mountain
above the castle keep
high atop the mountain
the cliffs are very steep
the ocean waves roll and crash
against the jagged rocks below
the ocean waves roll and crash
as the vessels come and go
some sit in the harbor
resting in the shoals
hatches full of memories
bound for ports within the soul
take me down the mountain
onto the valley floor
take me down the mountain
I can't stay up here no more
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Author:
willyweed (
Offline) - Published: July 25th, 2017 15:25
- Category: Fantasy
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I'm leaving right where are if you're going to keep writing like this willyweed. was shocked to see you back my friend and man have I missed your poetry. where have you been?
Well Kevin first hello my friend, I am in a battle with cancer and have not been well for a few months ,
but I am getting stronger as the days go by and expect a full recovery so no worries about me I hope to resume writing and reclaim a spot here as one to compete with raise the game. how are you doing my brother ww is back!
I was unaware of your situation but am gratefully glad you have returned and God bless you. so you're up for competition, are you? well, you have plenty to compete about but by the way of your come back poem I don't think many of us will have a chance by far if you keep writing like this. as for me, still writing as keen as ever and developing work on a regular basis. the passion is still there so watch out okay, you may be up for a bit of a match.
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Sorry to read of your troubles my friend and I hope they pass smoothly.
On the other side ,that came into my head as dancing leprechaun singing its song. Thank you so much, can't wait to get more or dig through the other treasures of art you have!
Well Dan if you do visit start on page 9 , and know that I do so appreciate your interest! peace ww
No worries, you have time to see my latest thoughts on "every word I see and hear" you know I understand.
tHANKS FOR CARIN' AN' SHARIN' WILLY ! Missed you lots and pray for you every day. God hates CANCER and HE will help you beat it ! Like you I love a MOUNTAIN TOP experience ~ but I can only stay there for so long. Love the hustle & bustle of the Market Pklce and the tranquilty of the Park ~ ready for anything Love BRIAN OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Thank you Brian for your thoughts and prays, The Lord told me not to worry I will come clean on the other side of this illness, it has been a dark night in hell but Jesus has lead the way! In his goodness and love I will be made pure! All we all really need is love! peace brother, its nice to be back! ww
Wonderful poem! I am so sorry to read about your recent struggles, I have missed you on MPS!! But I love the description to your poem. Glad you are back!
Thank You Christina, I missed you too!
Just rising here in the UK and the first thing I see is a posting by Sir WW - Keep getting better friend and keep writing work like this. So nice to have you back.
its nice to feel well enough to write, and good to be back with old friends! Thank you Michael.
Great to see you back WW and back with such a bang with this poem. I am sorry about your problems but I do sincerely hope that times are getting better.
getting better all the time my friend, its nice to be writing again! Thank You Goldfinch.
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