Afterglow.
The sky idly changes
as day is erased,
awesomely flaring
with in-coming night,
slowly emerging
like skeins of grey fur
as dusky silence
births luminous shade
and I wordless
mouth praise for such
order maintained
as afterglow merges
to mystical beauty
of twilight's creating.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: July 30th, 2017 03:31
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Breathless burst of day fade words. Every poem of yours is my favorite.
Never knew so much happened in the twilight! A fine write Fay. heehee.
Beautifully descriptive
As we, your fellow poets, thank him for you, Fay. You've shown us again how it's done with this fine one.
AFTERGLOW ~ FAY ~ Now there's a double entendre in a title ! We (and especially we Men) could learn an awesome lot if we paid more attention to Nature ! As expected ~ Lovely Poem & Picture ! Yours BRIAN
Your title caught my attention as I love sunrises & sunsets. I wish they lasted longer. But then I can just read this poem of yours and re-live a sunsets whenever I want. Beautiful Fay.
Wonderful!!!!!
Simply wonderful
very good faye. evening
Beautiful write Fay.
The sky changing from day to night is one of the most beautiful of nature's spectacles, and you portray it perfectly!
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