MY TEACHER ~ went to
PARIS ~ She fell in LOUVRE ~ with
The MONA LISA ?
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Amour BRIAN
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BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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Phew! Thought I would have to swoon, opening the title of this poem! Good write Brian. heehee.
Thanks STEVE ~ perhaps I should have labelled it 18 ~ judging by her SMILE ! Last time I made a GIRL smile like that ~ I had to marry her ! BRIAN
Crash! Me swooning and falling over! Erm, she's in my bedroom. Mona Lisa pic that is!
Well STEVE it sure ensures you get at least one smile in the day ! BRIAN
The hussy - she was in mine the night before!
So sorry to hear they both fell - nice one Brian - will write a haiku later today - in fact 2 or 3. if I have time.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ You artists are all in love with sweet ML! I have revised it to a SENRYU as it a 5 7 5 Poem about PEOPLE ~ OK ~ BRIAN (Poetry sites are a minefield !)
Okay - I'll make mine about people too - actually as a piece of art I can think of many paintings I would rather have that the ML - I sometimes think she wears Emperors clothes.
That is true MICHAEL ~ the first time I saw he in the LOUVRE I was 16 and was disappointed at just how small and dark the actual painting was ~ after all the HYPE ~ Emperor's (or should that be Empresses' ?) Clothes indeed ! BRIAN
An intriguing picture is La Gioconda as is this senryu.
Thanks ANDY ~ Will rectify my TITLE ! BRIAN
Ah, love in the Louvre? Lervly!
INDEED FRANK ~ Like tete-a-tete in the TATE or the TALKER ~ thrown out of the WALKER (Art Gallery Liverpool) Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN
Interesting, *i also find it amusing that this was written write after I posted my three line poem*
Nice write as always!
Thanks for your comment AZURA ~ Well MPS is like that ~ What and how others choose to write ~ stirs my MUSE ~ and I love all the 575 poems (HAIKU & SENRYU) neat & compact ! ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Great write
Thanks TONY ~ pleased you enjoyed it ~ BRIAN
Welcome
Cute writing. I never been to Paris. Still want to go live there for a while.
Thanks MALU ~ I first went when I was 16 been many times since. Great CITY for so many reasons ! The longest i have stayed is THREE WEEKS ! Friends who have lived there for a YEAR or more tell me that after a year you really begin to feel a PARISIAN ! Hope you get to go sometime. My FRENCH is petty good ~ which is a help ~ lots of French words are similar to Spanish & Portuguese & Italian as they are all derived from Latin ! As far as English is concerned all the short words are different from French and all the long words are similar ! With GERMAN & ENGLISH it's the other way round as both are derived from Anglo-Saxon ~ OK. Hugs ~ BRIAN
Clever senryu!! Very good poem. I saw your first reply to a comment! Made me smile! Hugs to you-Christina
THANKS CHRISTINA ~ Pleased you enjoyed the sentiment ~ My first reply was apocryphal but maybe prophetical as well ? Happy Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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