Things didn’t work out
Between you and me
It’s evident for anyone to see
I saw you the other day
How you’ve grown and moved on with grace
From which I’ve done the same
I feel nothing for you
But I still want you to
I don’t want a relationship
Just company
To feel adored
Longed for
I want you to hold a flame for me
Nothing more
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Author:
ShannonXx (
Offline) - Published: August 7th, 2017 08:14
- Category: Love
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Comments10
Lovely poem
Thanks
I love LADIES Shannon ~ because often all they need is to be adored and flattered for how they look an act ~ not just because of the favours they can bestow ! So I am always nice to ladies and always treat them with TLC because "They are worth it !" For the record "I adore you Shannon !" Love BRIAN XX
Aw thank you
Beautifully expressed.
Thank you!
What are we without hope
I agree!
To feel these things is one thing, butt to put pen to paper and share it is another. Thanks for sharing that and keep writing, I agree the last lines flow really well and are really strong.
Thank you!! 🙂
Lovely write Shannon, I enjoyed it a lot
Thank you
Beautiful expression of love and friendship. Great writing.
Thank you!!
Great bit of writing, sweetheart. Telling, too, when you look at the last lines.
"I want you to hold a flame for me
Nothing more"
Thank you 😊
Very good write, hope should always be there and sometimes it can be quite surprising.
Thanks! Yes that's true
I sense that your poem speaks from the heart, and with words full of meaning and desire. Love it.
Thank you!!
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