Dreamers

Michael Edwards

                                                                                             

 

DREAMERS

 

A time for lovers

Night skies seeded with bright pearls

Stars fade in daylight.

 

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2017 00:03
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments12

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good write Michael.

    Good painting as well.

  • orchidee

    A fine write and pic Michael, and a 'dreaming spire' of a church too!

  • orchidee

    A fine write and pic Michael, and a 'dreaming spire' of a church too!

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Perfect Painting ~ Superb Senryu ~ delighted my Morning ! Mine is also a Love Poem today ~ Yours BRIAN.

  • Brycycle

    Good write, i love the middle line 😀

  • Fay Slimm.

    So true that night skies can evoke much in lovers - - lovely brushwork too.

  • Michael Edwards

    Thanks everyone for all your kind words - so much appreciated

  • Louis Gibbs

    The watercolor, I guess that is what it is, is absolutely beautiful ... I couldn't stop looking at it. Not only the detail, but the perspective you employed. Love it, Michael!

    • Michael Edwards

      'Tis indeed a watercolour looking down the High Street of my local town. I actually live in a village just outside the town but it's only a few minutes drive away through some lovely countryside. Thanks for commenting Louis.

      • Louis Gibbs

        It sounds like a beautiful place to be!

      • malubotelho

        Lovely three lines. Nothing better than a pier over the ocean to look at the stars. Hand in hand with love.

        • Michael Edwards

          Ahh - the memories

          • malubotelho

            Well, I still doing this eventually. Seems like when we are older we can not be romantic anymore but I sometimes forget my age and play as a teen. We have a beautiful pier close by and also a lighthouse.

          • WriteBeLight

            Briefly beautiful and very bucolic picture Michael.

            • Michael Edwards

              A bit alcoholic late at night - The Brown Cow is just out of the picture.

            • Nicholas Browning

              The amount of comments on this is impressive. I must admit, it's simple, yet delicate. Stunning.

              • Michael Edwards

                Thanks Nicholas for your kind comments.

              • Suresh

                I can see myself walking down that familiar avenue - dreaming of days past.

                A serene image

                • Michael Edwards

                  Thank you so much - I really feel so honoured how you keep looking back into my old postings.



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