Take me away,
To where the silence touches my mind
To where my spirit can melt into light
To where the whole me turns into dust
Where I can begin to write a new story
Take me away to the blue paradise
Where I can listen to God whispers
Songs of freedom and contentment
Where the good remains in goodness
Where my womb flourishes with love
Where I repose in vacation from my sin
Where I have no need to begin
To write a new story
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Author:
Malu (Pseudonym) (
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Absolutely beautiful, Malu! Your talent grows consistently.
Thank you so much Louis. I appreciate your comment.
There is place of quiet rest
Near the Heart of Creator God
A place where sin can ne'er molest
Near to the Heart of God
Love the visual ~ Reflections !
MALU ~ you have shared a beautiful Poem ~ which is also beautiful Prayer. We all long for a quiet place away from the cares of the World ~ were we can commune alone with God
Thanks for sharing ~ Love You for being You ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian. Thanks for sharing the perfume that exhales from your heart. You have a beautiful heart.
Such an outstanding appeal in this verse Malu - the title itself is a gentle reminder of where peace can be found. A lovely read.
Thank you Fay. I really appreciate your comments.
A fine write M.
Thank you Orch.
Just delightful - read it aloud - err quietly or the family would think I'm going doolally . Love your photo.
Hehehe! You can say you were praying. Thanks for your comment. Lovely
Beautiful write
Thanks Tony
Welcome
Sure need a blue paradise. So beautiful.
Yes, we all need that serene place where we feel soft and lite like a feather. Hope you can find it. Thanks for commenting
Super write the calmness pervades these words.
Thank you Gold. Yes, we need it. Comments very appreciated.
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