Blue paradise

malubotelho

Take me away,
To where the silence touches my mind
To where my spirit can melt into light
To where the whole me turns into dust
Where I can begin to write a new story
Take me away to the blue paradise
Where I can listen to God whispers
Songs of freedom and contentment
Where the good remains in goodness
Where my womb flourishes with love
Where I repose in vacation from my sin
Where I have no need to begin
             To write a new story

  • Author: Malu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2017 08:38
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Louis Gibbs

    Absolutely beautiful, Malu! Your talent grows consistently.

    • malubotelho

      Thank you so much Louis. I appreciate your comment.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      There is place of quiet rest
      Near the Heart of Creator God
      A place where sin can ne'er molest
      Near to the Heart of God

      Love the visual ~ Reflections !

      MALU ~ you have shared a beautiful Poem ~ which is also beautiful Prayer. We all long for a quiet place away from the cares of the World ~ were we can commune alone with God

      Thanks for sharing ~ Love You for being You ~ BRIAN

      • malubotelho

        Thanks Brian. Thanks for sharing the perfume that exhales from your heart. You have a beautiful heart.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Such an outstanding appeal in this verse Malu - the title itself is a gentle reminder of where peace can be found. A lovely read.

        • malubotelho

          Thank you Fay. I really appreciate your comments.

        • orchidee

          A fine write M.

        • Michael Edwards

          Just delightful - read it aloud - err quietly or the family would think I'm going doolally . Love your photo.

          • malubotelho

            Hehehe! You can say you were praying. Thanks for your comment. Lovely

          • Tony36

            Beautiful write

          • myself and me

            Sure need a blue paradise. So beautiful.

            • malubotelho

              Yes, we all need that serene place where we feel soft and lite like a feather. Hope you can find it. Thanks for commenting

            • Goldfinch60

              Super write the calmness pervades these words.

            • malubotelho

              Thank you Gold. Yes, we need it. Comments very appreciated.



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