White
the wraiths
of mist fade
after the night
dawn.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A new form for me - just had to give it a go - I've done a couple more which I'll post over the weekend.
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This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. Good write.
Yes - a long while since I tried a FIBS. Thanks Andy.
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh, that's late! lol.
I was up at 4 and went back to bed - I've got a drive over to Ironbridge today so thought I better get a bit more rest
Ohhhhhh MICHAEL only Numero Due today ~ oversleep ? Nice pen & ink ~ Itallia ? All good poetry is governed by rhythm (syllabic) not rhyme and 12341 has a nice crisp lilt to it and 11 syllables are easy to assimilate (understand even) @ 7 in the morning ! Love the cycle of the poem ~ Thanks for PENNING ~ please sample my City Girls clothed invitingly in SENRYU SARONGS ! BRIAN
Been out in Ironbridge all day and was running around getting ready first thing and missed the slot. Written two more which I'll post over the weekend - thanks for comments Brian.
Fine write 🙂
Thank you Lizzy
You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I love the words!
Seems to work - two more to inflict over the weekend. Thanks Fred
This is awesome. Very nice writing. Enjoy reading.
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