MADRID ~ Place to meeta

Senorita ~ but to pull ~ first you

must kill your BULL !



just love to talk ~ and some are

CLASSY ~ all are SASSY !


ROME ~ I lost my heart

to BERNADETTI ~ hot meat balls

and cool spaghetti !


LONDON ~ Cockney Girls

are pretty ~ but alas they're

married to the CITY


PARIS ~ cool and chic

French Girls make my heart go pique

just one big Boutique !


ATHENS ~ Girls are also chic

modern ~ stylish ~ full of charm

and none of them ANTIQUE !


Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Urban charm to All


Please forgive Poetic License not all my Senryu are 575

and they all (God forbid) RHYME ~ but it is FRIDAY !  


  • Goldfinch60

    Good write, I take it you like all girls - well they are wonderful are they not?,


      Thanks ANDY YES because their FEMININITY complements my MASCULINITY and makes us both more COMPLETE ~ OK The Femininity of a Lady (in my experience) make all her other qualities (Ethnicity ~ Age etc) secondary OK. I like to fish ~ rock climb ~ play sports etc with my Male Mates but being with Angela makes me feel complete ! My poem tomorrow CARIBBEAN GIRL explores the choices we have to make during courtship (good old 20th C word !) check my reply to KAT ~ Yours BRIAN

    • orchidee

      A fine write Brian.


        Thanks STEVE ~ I knew you would appreciate it ! Please check some of my longer reply comments ~ about femininity ! Yours BRIAN

      • Santita

        Great job, Brian. I love the positivity of all your writes! and I agree with Kat, girls, girls, girls LOL *hugs

        • BRIANSODES

          Well SANITA ~ I like Feminine Girls and it is their Femininity in Dress ~ Cosmetics ~ Hair ~ Walk and Talk etc that I love ~ I like SASSY GIRLS as well as CLASSY GIRLS ! Thanks for your lovely comment ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@

        • Michael Edwards

          I love 'em all - what about Market Harborough girls?

          • BRIANSODES

            Thanks MICHAEL ~ I never heard a song which went "Why can they all be ~ Market Harborough Girls ........................ ? I know (from personal experience) that Loughborough & Leicester Girls are nice so MHG's must be OK as well ! BRIAN

          • Martina Lynch

            This is fun...great write...not coming from the city though!

            • BRIANSODES

              Thanks MARTINA ~ Town & Village Girls are just as Pretty ~ but Sweeter and much less expensive !
              Yours ~ BRIAN

              • Martina Lynch

                This is

              • malubotelho

                Love your poem about girls. Cheerful reading.

                • BRIANSODES

                  Thanks MALU ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ~ I like to bring a smile to MPS ~ love BRIAN

                • Accidental Poet

                  Where would a boy be without a girl? Lonely. Nice write Brian.

                  • BRIANSODES

                    Thanks AP ! I agree ~ Vive La Difference ~ Vive L'opportunite ! Please check CARIBBEAN GIRL today ~ Thanks BRIAN

                  • Christina S

                    Very clever write, Brian! Love the senryu! Sorry this review comes to you late but you did a great job on it! Hugs-Christina

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