MADRID ~ Place to meeta
Senorita ~ but to pull ~ first you
must kill your BULL !
NEW YORK ~ NEW YORK ~ Girls
just love to talk ~ and some are
CLASSY ~ all are SASSY !
ROME ~ I lost my heart
to BERNADETTI ~ hot meat balls
and cool spaghetti !
LONDON ~ Cockney Girls
are pretty ~ but alas they're
married to the CITY
PARIS ~ cool and chic
French Girls make my heart go pique
just one big Boutique !
ATHENS ~ Girls are also chic
modern ~ stylish ~ full of charm
and none of them ANTIQUE !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Urban charm to All
Please forgive Poetic License not all my Senryu are 575
and they all (God forbid) RHYME ~ but it is FRIDAY !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The 21st C is definitely a Woman's World ~ OK ! However for us Men that has advantages ! The Girls play hard to get but when you succeed they melt like butter ! British Men ~ in their Prime ~ are a Match for ~ Bullfighters ~ New York Bankers ~ Italian Gigolos ~ French Footballers and Greek Gods ! I've discovered with Cockney girls that if you buy them a good helping of Pie 'n Mash and a pint of Chardonnay the night is yours ! Every Man has his price ! Try making up your ditty for your city ~ its easy. The Girls in Hollywood are good ~ thy still all act like Betty Grable ~ Ready Willing and very Able ! Thanks for visiting ~ excuse my lightheartedness and I still respect all Ladies ~ but it is FRIDAY ! Comments welcome ~ Love to ALL ~ BRIAN XOX
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Comments6
Good write, I take it you like all girls - well they are wonderful are they not?,
Thanks ANDY YES because their FEMININITY complements my MASCULINITY and makes us both more COMPLETE ~ OK The Femininity of a Lady (in my experience) make all her other qualities (Ethnicity ~ Age etc) secondary OK. I like to fish ~ rock climb ~ play sports etc with my Male Mates but being with Angela makes me feel complete ! My poem tomorrow CARIBBEAN GIRL explores the choices we have to make during courtship (good old 20th C word !) check my reply to KAT ~ Yours BRIAN
A fine write Brian.
Thanks STEVE ~ I knew you would appreciate it ! Please check some of my longer reply comments ~ about femininity ! Yours BRIAN
I love 'em all - what about Market Harborough girls?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I never heard a song which went "Why can they all be ~ Market Harborough Girls ........................ ? I know (from personal experience) that Loughborough & Leicester Girls are nice so MHG's must be OK as well ! BRIAN
Love your poem about girls. Cheerful reading.
Thanks MALU ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ~ I like to bring a smile to MPS ~ love BRIAN
Where would a boy be without a girl? Lonely. Nice write Brian.
Thanks AP ! I agree ~ Vive La Difference ~ Vive L'opportunite ! Please check CARIBBEAN GIRL today ~ Thanks BRIAN
Very clever write, Brian! Love the senryu! Sorry this review comes to you late but you did a great job on it! Hugs-Christina
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