BRIANSODES

CITY GIRLS ~ SIX SIZZLING SENRYU

 

 

MADRID ~ Place to meeta

Senorita ~ but to pull ~ first you

must kill your BULL !

 

NEW YORK ~ NEW YORK ~ Girls

just love to talk ~ and some are

CLASSY ~ all are SASSY !

 

ROME ~ I lost my heart

to BERNADETTI ~ hot meat balls

and cool spaghetti !

 

LONDON ~ Cockney Girls

are pretty ~ but alas they're

married to the CITY

 

PARIS ~ cool and chic

French Girls make my heart go pique

just one big Boutique !

 

ATHENS ~ Girls are also chic

modern ~ stylish ~ full of charm

and none of them ANTIQUE !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Urban charm to All

 

Please forgive Poetic License not all my Senryu are 575

and they all (God forbid) RHYME ~ but it is FRIDAY !  

Comments9

  • Kat

    A lovely write! You like girls, girls, girls. LOL. No matter where they come from. Good luck!

    • BRIANSODES

      WELL KAT ~ GOD created Eve to compliment Adam and together they were complete ! So it is with all MALE ~ FEMALE relationships ~ I am happier (and more complete) with a Girlfriend than on my own or just with a gang of Lads ! For me it is her gender (femininity) that makes it special & complimentary ! Ethnicity ~ Age ~ Class ~ Creed etc are secondary it is the unique symbiosis of YIN & YANG that I love. I have never felt that bond with another Man ~ so i can't comment on same sex relationships ~ OK. My Poem tomorrow ~ CARRIBEAN GIRL ~ explore the choice a Young Man torn between visiting his Girlfriend (who is expecting him) or the invitation (and temptation) to go fishing with his mates ! Thanks for you comment ~ Hugs BRIAN

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write, I take it you like all girls - well they are wonderful are they not?,

      • BRIANSODES

        Thanks ANDY YES because their FEMININITY complements my MASCULINITY and makes us both more COMPLETE ~ OK The Femininity of a Lady (in my experience) make all her other qualities (Ethnicity ~ Age etc) secondary OK. I like to fish ~ rock climb ~ play sports etc with my Male Mates but being with Angela makes me feel complete ! My poem tomorrow CARIBBEAN GIRL explores the choices we have to make during courtship (good old 20th C word !) check my reply to KAT ~ Yours BRIAN

      • orchidee

        A fine write Brian.

        • BRIANSODES

          Thanks STEVE ~ I knew you would appreciate it ! Please check some of my longer reply comments ~ about femininity ! Yours BRIAN

        • Santita

          Great job, Brian. I love the positivity of all your writes! and I agree with Kat, girls, girls, girls LOL *hugs

          • BRIANSODES

            Well SANITA ~ I like Feminine Girls and it is their Femininity in Dress ~ Cosmetics ~ Hair ~ Walk and Talk etc that I love ~ I like SASSY GIRLS as well as CLASSY GIRLS ! Thanks for your lovely comment ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@

          • Michael Edwards

            I love 'em all - what about Market Harborough girls?

            • BRIANSODES

              Thanks MICHAEL ~ I never heard a song which went "Why can they all be ~ Market Harborough Girls ........................ ? I know (from personal experience) that Loughborough & Leicester Girls are nice so MHG's must be OK as well ! BRIAN

            • Martina Lynch

              This is fun...great write...not coming from the city though!

              • BRIANSODES

                Thanks MARTINA ~ Town & Village Girls are just as Pretty ~ but Sweeter and much less expensive !
                Yours ~ BRIAN

                • Martina Lynch

                  This is true....lol

                • malubotelho

                  Love your poem about girls. Cheerful reading.

                  • BRIANSODES

                    Thanks MALU ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ~ I like to bring a smile to MPS ~ love BRIAN

                  • Accidental Poet

                    Where would a boy be without a girl? Lonely. Nice write Brian.

                    • BRIANSODES

                      Thanks AP ! I agree ~ Vive La Difference ~ Vive L'opportunite ! Please check CARIBBEAN GIRL today ~ Thanks BRIAN

                    • Christina S

                      Very clever write, Brian! Love the senryu! Sorry this review comes to you late but you did a great job on it! Hugs-Christina



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