I'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY !

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  Michael Edwards August 14th, 2017 02:49

  Funloads - great write - great read.

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 04:28

    Thanks MICHAEL I'm hoping for a FUN WEEK on MPS ~ too much gloom & doom lately ! BRIAN

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  FredPeyer August 14th, 2017 02:52

  Brian, I wanna be a pirate too. Got my rubber ducky ready!
  Thanks for a great poem.

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 04:31

    Thanks FRED ~ All red blooded Males want to join Brad Pitt or _at least ~ spend a Month in Jamaica ~ Thanks for your comment and approval ~ BRIAN

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  Fay Slimm. August 14th, 2017 05:22

  Me luves them sorts o' pirates me does - -- good fun write Brian.

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 05:24

    Thanks FAY ~ You should know ~ Cornwall has always had its share ! Yours as ever BRIAN. What car do you dive ? Please check my latest Fusion on CARS ~ B.

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  Louis Gibbs August 14th, 2017 06:59

  A well done cute one, Briansodes! You caught the lingo beautifully.

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 08:22

    Well Louis ~ Havin' lived in Leeds ~ you catch a bit 'o de PATOIS. Pleased you liked the poem ! Please check my FUSION on CARS ~ Thanks BRIAN

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  Azura Nightsong August 14th, 2017 07:27

  This is a fun poem. Nice job!
  Azuranna

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 08:19

    Thanks AZURA ~ I wanted to inject a little fun this week ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion on CARS ~ Thanks B.

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  Goldfinch60 August 14th, 2017 07:58

  Very good fun write. The cricket with the Caribbean Pirates starts this week.

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 08:29

    Cricket lovely Cricket
    It was at Lord's where I saw it
    With those little pals of mine
    Rhamadin an' Valentine !
    
    Thanks ANDY ~ I wanted to inject
    a bit of fun into MPS ~ this week !
    Please check my latest FUSION
    on CARS ~ Yours BRIAN.

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  orchidee August 14th, 2017 08:53

  You had some sherry too, as well as me?! heehee.

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 09:21

    Thanks STEVE ~ My after dinner tipple is PORT (In the CAIBBEAN it's RUM !) ~ but it has the same effect as Sherry ! It releases my MUSE but in Hallucinatory Mode ~ the POEM ~ I'm a Caribbean Pirate was the result ! Where would we be without SHORTS ? Naked & embarrassed ! BRIAN

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  WriteBeLight August 14th, 2017 12:17

  Makes you feel like dancing Brian!

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 13:14

    Well ANGEL ~ Love all the Caribbean Islands ~ including CUBA ~ because they all have dancing feet and I love to dance ~ even on HATS ~ when in MEXICO ! Thanks for your comment ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

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  Lizzy Renee August 14th, 2017 13:04

  Nice Job! It was not only poetic, but enjoyable as well.

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 14th, 2017 13:22

    Thanks LIZZY ~ you are obviously a Dancer by your AVI and the Caribbean is a 24/7 DANCE ! There are two factors which make a good poem: STRUCTURE (rhyme ~ rhythm ~ versification etc) and SUBJECT (the contents of the Poem the story it tells etc) if these two are in HARMONY ~ THEN it is a good poem ! Pleased you liked both ~ my Subject (enjoyable) & Structure (poetic) ! Thanks for your encouragement ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

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  Christina8 August 14th, 2017 22:10

  A well done fun poem!! Great job! Hugs, Christina

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    BRIAN & ANGELAAugust 15th, 2017 01:52

    Thanks CHRIS I decided to inject a little fun into MPS ~ Caribbean Hugs for You ~ BRIAN