I'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE
See me red bandana
At all tings I'm good
I'm a Caribbean Pirate
I got rithum ~ I got rithum
In me Blood !
Se me dance de Salsa
Man jus' beat de Drum
Serve me Pina Collada
An' pour in EXTRA RUM !
I'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE
I can do de Limbo
Please lower de bar
I'm a Caribbean Pirate
I can sing Calypso
In de Bath an' in de Shower
I love dressin' fancy
I'm a high class Mister
If yuh think I'm braggin'
Keep yuh eyes on yuh Sister
I'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE
Where yuh tink
I got de rithum ?
I'm a Caribbean Pirate
An' my mates all
Have a Steel Band withum !
How about de Cricket
On dat subject sound me
Jus' put de willow in me hand
I'll wack ball to de Boundary !
Thanks for reading ~ comments welcome ~ Caribbean love ~ BRIAN
The structure of this Poem is an AxbAxb Sextet folowed by an xcxc Quatrain
The spelling of some of the words assists the Caribbean rhythm ~ OK
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 14th, 2017 02:20
- Category: Reflection
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Comments10
Funloads - great write - great read.
Thanks MICHAEL I'm hoping for a FUN WEEK on MPS ~ too much gloom & doom lately ! BRIAN
Brian, I wanna be a pirate too. Got my rubber ducky ready!
Thanks for a great poem.
Thanks FRED ~ All red blooded Males want to join Brad Pitt or _at least ~ spend a Month in Jamaica ~ Thanks for your comment and approval ~ BRIAN
Me luves them sorts o' pirates me does - -- good fun write Brian.
Thanks FAY ~ You should know ~ Cornwall has always had its share ! Yours as ever BRIAN. What car do you dive ? Please check my latest Fusion on CARS ~ B.
A well done cute one, Briansodes! You caught the lingo beautifully.
Well Louis ~ Havin' lived in Leeds ~ you catch a bit 'o de PATOIS. Pleased you liked the poem ! Please check my FUSION on CARS ~ Thanks BRIAN
This is a fun poem. Nice job!
Azuranna
Thanks AZURA ~ I wanted to inject a little fun this week ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion on CARS ~ Thanks B.
Very good fun write. The cricket with the Caribbean Pirates starts this week.
Cricket lovely Cricket
It was at Lord's where I saw it
With those little pals of mine
Rhamadin an' Valentine !
Thanks ANDY ~ I wanted to inject
a bit of fun into MPS ~ this week !
Please check my latest FUSION
on CARS ~ Yours BRIAN.
You had some sherry too, as well as me?! heehee.
Thanks STEVE ~ My after dinner tipple is PORT (In the CAIBBEAN it's RUM !) ~ but it has the same effect as Sherry ! It releases my MUSE but in Hallucinatory Mode ~ the POEM ~ I'm a Caribbean Pirate was the result ! Where would we be without SHORTS ? Naked & embarrassed ! BRIAN
Makes you feel like dancing Brian!
Well ANGEL ~ Love all the Caribbean Islands ~ including CUBA ~ because they all have dancing feet and I love to dance ~ even on HATS ~ when in MEXICO ! Thanks for your comment ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
Nice Job! It was not only poetic, but enjoyable as well.
Thanks LIZZY ~ you are obviously a Dancer by your AVI and the Caribbean is a 24/7 DANCE ! There are two factors which make a good poem: STRUCTURE (rhyme ~ rhythm ~ versification etc) and SUBJECT (the contents of the Poem the story it tells etc) if these two are in HARMONY ~ THEN it is a good poem ! Pleased you liked both ~ my Subject (enjoyable) & Structure (poetic) ! Thanks for your encouragement ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
A well done fun poem!! Great job! Hugs, Christina
Thanks CHRIS I decided to inject a little fun into MPS ~ Caribbean Hugs for You ~ BRIAN
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