Essence Poems – A Sequence
She walked across the hill
He stalked the lady still.
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He caught her in the wood
Though fraught she understood.
She saw she could not hide
The door was open wide.
‘Yes do put out the light
It’s you and me tonight’.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The Essence poem, created by Emily Romano is a short, structured form of two-lines, six syllables each with an end rhyme and internal rhyme.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I didn't initially intend that they should go together but as I wrote them they took on their own life hence I've put them together in a logical sequence. Hope you like them._________Plus one of my abstracts.
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I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract - have you been at the Jackson Pollack again?
Had a pint this morning - actually it's painted with a scrub bud - now I'm giving the secrets away - thanks Andy
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
And still second - but I hiccuped
Michael, not only did you post on the 0:00 mark, you also posted an incredible poem. I guess it's me and your poem tonight!
Aw thanks Fred - not sure if I'll do any more of these but it was a great exercise.
Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work Michael
Interesting to do but not easy - thanks Fay
Ha - - - -- - - - oh my apologies for my unfinished comment dear Michael - -- - -- packs a loud what ??? - -
- - I meant to type - - "packs a loud bravo into a two-liner " - - - - -where did that Bravo go I wonder !!!!
That's okay Fay - I thought you were saving it to use in another poem Lol 🙂
SEDUCTION & SUBMISSION MICHAEL ~ It was ever thus ~ and evermore shall be so ! Love the structure of the Poem and the Scrub Pad Abstract ! Please check my Anarchy ~ Wordless Poem ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian - will do.
expression in two lines. Loved the work. Great read.
Thank you for looking in and for your generous comment Lasergraph.
As always you give me a lesson on writing. Excellent
Thank you kindly - go on - have a go.
Cool - both poem and picture Michael!
Thanks WBL - still not sure if it's one poem or four separate couplets which seem to follow a sort of common path - not that it matters.
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
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