I lay in the darkened room,
Just my thoughts for company.
The moon rises,
Its light pervades my thoughts.
The breeze stirs the trees
And their shadows
Dance on the walls,
And I dance with them,
Dance with Nature’s shadows.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 17th, 2017 01:01
- Comment from author about the poem: Just something that came to me.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments13
I like this a lot. The feeling it gives is similar to how it feels outside right now. Good one Finch.
Thank you Nicholas, much appreciated.
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
It just came and it's just great - I do like this Andy.
Thanks Michael, much appreciated.
And I dance with your beautiful poem, Goldfinch!
Thank you Fred, most kind.
Your love of nature and beauty shine through. Well written and a good springboard for my thoughts today.x
Thank you so much, may you have a good day.
VERY APT ANDY ! I have many Friends & Family ~ in your age group ~Lying in darkened rooms ~ Dancing with Nature's Shadows ! Every Blessing ~ DOCTOR BRIAN ! Please check my MIDDLEMAN ~ Yours BRIAN
Thank you Brian.
As we all dance with the shadow-world we see. Well done, Goldie!
Thank you Louis.
I wrote a poem like this too. It started: "I lay in a darkened room / Recovering from sherries....."Then I did not write any more! Strange that. lol.
Not so strange, the pork pies probably took precedence.
Cool poem Just right
Thank you WL much appreciated.
Great write
Thank you Tony.
Welcome
Such lovely words. Sweet inspiration speaking to your heart.
You are very kind M, thank you very much.
Welcome
I enjoyed this - its strange where our mind takes us when it's given freedom to roam!
The mind is a strange being and can take us anywhere. Thank you for commenting Sue.
I'm glad it came because this dance was music to my ears Gold!
Thank you pb, much appreciated.
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