“Andy! Andy! Come quick!!” the wife yelled.
I raced to her, thinking she was hurt!
“Is that a dead bird in the garden?” she shouted,
I looked out and saw it,
A large brown bird lying still on the ground.
A smile came to my face,
I knew what it was.
I walked gently into the garden
Down to the bird.
Gently picked it up,
And replaced the metal heron
Back into its place
From whence it had fallen.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 21st, 2017 01:58
- Comment from author about the poem: This was true.
- Category: Humor
- Views: 63
Comments8
This gave me a gentle smile touched with a sprinkling of sadness - nice piece Andy.
Thank you Michael.
Smiles ; )
Thanks AP, smiles show my work is done.
smiles smiles smiles smiles smiles smiles smiles smiles ; )
You had me going there, Goldie. Glad it turned out well. Enjoyed it!
Thank you Louis. We do feed birds in the garden and I have held many in my hand that have hit our conservatory windows but surprisingly very few fatalities.
A fine write Gold. It's good if we can nurse back an injured bird. Hmm, I thought a cat was attacking a bird, until the cat did not move. it was a statue. doh! (too much sherry, Orchi).
Thanks Orchi.
Cute and fun. Your picture is stunning. Lovely read. We have a fake eaglet on our garden and I love to see the real eaglets eating together with the pvc one.
Thanks M, much appreciated.
Im thinking this metal bird had slipped from the memory of your good lady as you had mentioned before. How great to see the amusement in this event and bring it before us with your style sir. I love the way you tell us your tails.
I too think it had been forgotten. Thank you for your wonderful comments.
The story was unfold so well at the end. A little surprise yet reasonable.
I guess the bird try to broken the glass to read your poem.:)
Thank you mandm.
Great write Goldfinch, if only all "problems" had such easy solutions!
Very true Fred, thank you for commenting.
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