We exist
As mere aspects
Of our entirety ...
Shards of a reflection
Too brilliant to gaze upon.
- Author: Louis Gibbs ( Offline)
- Published: August 23rd, 2017 06:30
- Comment from author about the poem: A short offering this morning in what I dub 'Philoetry' ... Philosophy as Poetry.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 38
- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., malubotelho, myself and me
Comments9
Thanks LOUIS ~ True ~ each day is an aspect ~ BUT ~ the Whole is a Blinding Light ~ which increases day-by-day ! BRIAN
Thanks for your comment, Brian!
Good write.
Thank you for that appraisal, Goldie.
The picture you pen of beings as human manifestations on this planet is one I relate to Louis - - we are a mere aspect indeed of our brilliant "entirety" - such an inspiring read. Saved to read over again.
Now I consider that a real honor, Fay ... both, considering it inspiring and saving it! Glad you could relate, though not surprised.Thank you for so generous a review!
I got too big for my boots - I thought you meant me, too stunning to see, a fount of all wisdom, folk dazzled by my knowledge, my mere appearance, etc, etc. Pass me the humble pie! heehee.
I do mean you ... all of us. You are certainly one of the dazzling too! Cheers.
I love you philoetry, Louis. And this one speaks to me since I have always regarded our souls to be like sparks that fly out from a brilliant center, eventually to return. You put it into much more elegant words.
I'd say your words are spot on, Fred. My belief echoed well, fellow Spark!
Small offering - big applause - nice one louis
My sincere thanks, Michael!
Brilliant reflections of a brilliant mind. Well done Louis.
I'm blushing, mb! So kind of you.
The Shards not brilliant, this poem is.
Entirety vs Shards, the philosophy burst out from the intense contrast is so bright and blind the eye.
Perhaps we shards do not realize our true brilliance. After all, we are aspects of Creator, are we not? Thanks for your complimentary response, m&m!
Wow, I found this short yes, but powerful , it's great Thanks
Thank you so much, Diamond! Glad you liked it.
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