Another Beautiful Day in Paradise

FredPeyer

Swinging both, tits and asses

The two stunning blonds sashay

Down busy Kalakaua Avenue

Through the heart of Waikiki

Drawing the stares of

Male tourists in gaudy shirts

And the envious looks of

Female tourists in cheap muumuus

 

The blonds holding on to their

Tiny pink designer hand-bags

Like drunks hold on to their

Precious bottles of cheap wine

Their stiletto-clad long shapely legs

Disappearing into gold mini skirts

Short enough to kickstart

Desire, imagination and lust

 

Tired all-knowing mascara heavy

Blue-lensed calculating eyes

Searching for the perfect mark:

The strutting Japanese business man

Crazy for big tits and blond hair

Finding him, closing in on him

Separating him from the herd

Promising exciting double nirvana

 

In his room at the ocean front hotel

They expertly raid his mini bar, show

Some wiggling flesh for payment up front

Overcome with lust, thinking only of sex

He surrenders his manhood to one of them

While the other secretly empties his wallet

Knowing from hard earned experience

He will be too embarrassed to complain

 

Just another beautiful day in paradise

 

 

Note: This kind of crime did and does happen,

not only in Waikiki, but other tourist destinations

as well and goes mostly un-reported.

  • Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 26th, 2017 02:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: If the hotel walls in Waikiki could talk I would have subject matter for a lifetime!
  • Category: Erotic
  • Views: 43
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  • Michael Edwards

    Great write with some super lines - I do like: mini skirts short enough to kick start desire.

    • FredPeyer

      Thank you Michael, should have been a little bit more 'dirty', but somehow couldn't do it. See above.

    • Louis Gibbs

      Well written description of a couple of working girls plying their trade, Fred. Nothing beats teamwork, for sure!

      • FredPeyer

        Thank you Louis, and teamwork it is, they got it down to a science. As long as there are stupid men, there will be working girls.

      • orchidee

        Erm I apologise I couldn't read this, on account of swooning at the first line! heehee. Well, I would even if it was remotely 'hot'!

        • FredPeyer

          Orchidee, you know how it is. You gotta get the reader with the first line! After that it can be all downhill.
          Thanks for reading and swooning!!! 🙂

        • dusk arising

          Tits and bums and legs and Fred. Its all here on my poetic side folks! Try to stay focussed and dont fall off the sidewalk mister the traffic is heavy today and i've just broken out in a sweat. Great work FredPeyer. (are u on commission?).

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks da, and no, I am not on commission!!!
            But you should see how beautiful (at least on the outside) some of them are. And Japanese tourists especially are drawn to them like moths to a flame!

            • dusk arising

              So tell me Fred, how often do you dress up Japanese tourist style with wallet full of maxed out cards and monopoly monies.

              • FredPeyer

                Believe it or not, we locals hardly ever go to Waikiki. Some sometimes spend a Weekend there playing tourists, but for most of us Waikiki is like a fairy land. We visit only when we have visitors.
                Sure, the hula shows, fireworks, and other attractions are nice, but in the end, it is just one big money machine. Just like all other tourist destinations.
                Having said that, it does not mean that you cannot enjoy your stay. The ocean and beaches are great, the weather, especially in Waikiki, is gorgeous, the food is good, the place is safe for the whole family, and you can relax and re-charge your batteries!

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                THANKS FRED ~ For lifting the lid on WAIKIKI ! I have visited HONOLULU must have gone to the wrong beach ! Does TRUMP know these Ladies are making AMERICA great again because they have a YEN for it ! My main reason for visiting HAWAII was to visit Pearl Harbor and the ARIZONA ~ very moving ! Love HAWAII and the HAWAIIAN girls ~ singing and dancing ~ that was a far as I got ! Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN

                • FredPeyer

                  Thank you Brian!
                  Don't know when you visited, but there is a Trump tower now in Waikiki. Love your YEN reference!
                  And yes, Pearl Harbor/Arizona is an incredibly moving experience. Probably the only time anybody visits a water cemetery.

                • malubotelho

                  Well, this is all normal and like Fred said it is the oldest profession. I like in Brazil that we can mix and put everybody in the same sidewalk or elevator. The transgender, the dogs, the oldies, the old profession girls, the babies on they carriages, the tourists we are all a share the same Copacabana. Just human beings with excitement and imperfections. Nice Writing Fred. I could see the picture.

                  • FredPeyer

                    With your Brazilian background I figured you would understand this poem. Even though it is a story about two thieving prostitutes, and the gullibility of certain tourists, it is also about human nature, greed, sexual attraction, the givers, the takers, right and wrong, and money.

                  • myself and me

                    Beautiful day with a beautiful crime. Full of humor.

                    "Like drunks hold on to their
                    Precious bottles of cheap wine"
                    Someone going to be mad.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Good write Fred. This way of life has been around forever and not a great deal can be done about it, but in some ways it does solve a problem for some.

                    • FredPeyer

                      Thank you Goldfinch, you are absolutely right!



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