Swinging both, tits and asses
The two stunning blonds sashay
Down busy Kalakaua Avenue
Through the heart of Waikiki
Drawing the stares of
Male tourists in gaudy shirts
And the envious looks of
Female tourists in cheap muumuus
The blonds holding on to their
Tiny pink designer hand-bags
Like drunks hold on to their
Precious bottles of cheap wine
Their stiletto-clad long shapely legs
Disappearing into gold mini skirts
Short enough to kickstart
Desire, imagination and lust
Tired all-knowing mascara heavy
Blue-lensed calculating eyes
Searching for the perfect mark:
The strutting Japanese business man
Crazy for big tits and blond hair
Finding him, closing in on him
Separating him from the herd
Promising exciting double nirvana
In his room at the ocean front hotel
They expertly raid his mini bar, show
Some wiggling flesh for payment up front
Overcome with lust, thinking only of sex
He surrenders his manhood to one of them
While the other secretly empties his wallet
Knowing from hard earned experience
He will be too embarrassed to complain
Just another beautiful day in paradise
Note: This kind of crime did and does happen,
not only in Waikiki, but other tourist destinations
as well and goes mostly un-reported.
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 26th, 2017 02:30
- Comment from author about the poem: If the hotel walls in Waikiki could talk I would have subject matter for a lifetime!
- Category: Erotic
- Views: 43
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Comments8
Great write with some super lines - I do like: mini skirts short enough to kick start desire.
Thank you Michael, should have been a little bit more 'dirty', but somehow couldn't do it. See above.
Well written description of a couple of working girls plying their trade, Fred. Nothing beats teamwork, for sure!
Thank you Louis, and teamwork it is, they got it down to a science. As long as there are stupid men, there will be working girls.
Erm I apologise I couldn't read this, on account of swooning at the first line! heehee. Well, I would even if it was remotely 'hot'!
Orchidee, you know how it is. You gotta get the reader with the first line! After that it can be all downhill.
Thanks for reading and swooning!!! 🙂
Tits and bums and legs and Fred. Its all here on my poetic side folks! Try to stay focussed and dont fall off the sidewalk mister the traffic is heavy today and i've just broken out in a sweat. Great work FredPeyer. (are u on commission?).
Thanks da, and no, I am not on commission!!!
But you should see how beautiful (at least on the outside) some of them are. And Japanese tourists especially are drawn to them like moths to a flame!
So tell me Fred, how often do you dress up Japanese tourist style with wallet full of maxed out cards and monopoly monies.
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THANKS FRED ~ For lifting the lid on WAIKIKI ! I have visited HONOLULU must have gone to the wrong beach ! Does TRUMP know these Ladies are making AMERICA great again because they have a YEN for it ! My main reason for visiting HAWAII was to visit Pearl Harbor and the ARIZONA ~ very moving ! Love HAWAII and the HAWAIIAN girls ~ singing and dancing ~ that was a far as I got ! Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN
Thank you Brian!
Don't know when you visited, but there is a Trump tower now in Waikiki. Love your YEN reference!
And yes, Pearl Harbor/Arizona is an incredibly moving experience. Probably the only time anybody visits a water cemetery.
Well, this is all normal and like Fred said it is the oldest profession. I like in Brazil that we can mix and put everybody in the same sidewalk or elevator. The transgender, the dogs, the oldies, the old profession girls, the babies on they carriages, the tourists we are all a share the same Copacabana. Just human beings with excitement and imperfections. Nice Writing Fred. I could see the picture.
With your Brazilian background I figured you would understand this poem. Even though it is a story about two thieving prostitutes, and the gullibility of certain tourists, it is also about human nature, greed, sexual attraction, the givers, the takers, right and wrong, and money.
Beautiful day with a beautiful crime. Full of humor.
"Like drunks hold on to their
Precious bottles of cheap wine"
Someone going to be mad.
Good write Fred. This way of life has been around forever and not a great deal can be done about it, but in some ways it does solve a problem for some.
Thank you Goldfinch, you are absolutely right!
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