Said and Unsaid.

Goldfinch60

Going through life

We hear people talk.

Some we understand,

Some we don’t ,

But much of what is said

Does not really matter.

There is also much

That is not said,

And therein lies the problem,

As much that matters in our lives,

Remains unsaid.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 27th, 2017 01:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is a refection that come to my mind and the photograph is a refection I took at a Brass Band concert.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 94
  • User favorite of this poem: poetboy123.
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Comments12

  • Michael Edwards

    Such a true observation Andy.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael.

    • FredPeyer

      I really, really like this poem, Goldfinch! You are so right, but there is also the other side of the coin. 'We hear people talk', but we don't listen!

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true. One of the things that I can do in my life is listen and I have helped many people just by listening.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        "You say it best ~ when you say nothing at all" Somethings ANDY are best left unsaid ! Glass is an awesome artistic medium ~ love the visual ! Thanks for sharing # BRIAN

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Brian. That 'glass' you refer to is a B flat bass.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Ahhhhhhhhhhh ANDY ~ I should have read your comment about the poem ~ Love Brass Bands having lived in Yorkshire for a while ! But I love GLASS (as well as BRASS) and my eye and brain interpreted the photo as a beautiful "banana" yellow "Glass bowl" ! You could THROW it but you couldn't BLOW it ! Yours BRIAN

          • Louis Gibbs

            A keen and accurate observation here, Goldie. Well put!

          • dusk arising

            Aaaaah wise words indeed. But you sir say so much in your works about the things we take for granted in our everyday. You have the way of making something bright worthwhile and interesting out of the very dust which gathers upon our day to day. Nice writing, pleasure to read.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you so much da, I very much appreciate what you said.

            • malubotelho

              So very true. Not only important things are left unsaid also when said we don't listen or don't understand. I've told you before. You are a wise man.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you mal, you are so kind.

              • orchidee

                I know what you mean. Some people just go on and on speaking, I said some people just.......! And are they talking sense, or waffling?! I SAID it's a good write G/F. There, I've SAID it. I didn't NOT SAY It!
                [Oh, do put that sherry down Orchi! ] lol.

                • Goldfinch60

                  I will come and take you porkies away!!

                • Accidental Poet

                  A reflection worth noting. So very true Goldfinch that some important things people say has fallen on deaf ears. ; )

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you AP. Very true.

                  • WL Schuett

                    Well done good observation turned into poetry

                  • poetboy123

                    One of the best poems I've read, incredible Gold!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      You are so kind pb5454, thank you so much.

                    • Christina8

                      Excellent poetry--your words ring so true!

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Christina.

                      • myself and me

                        "As much that matters in our lives,
                        Remains unsaid."
                        Someone once said if you love someone, say it, do not wait till it is too late.
                        A deep reflection, both the poem and the picture.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you mandm, much appreciated.



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