Untamed-Collection of Senryu

Christina8

Addicted to you

The fireworks are still there

Passionate fury

 

No need to speak words

As I kiss you with plum lips

Our love has spoken

 

Tangled up in love

The world has come to a halt

Untamed bliss ignites

 

Now the flames are lit

Sighs penetrate the night air

We are entangled

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 28th, 2017 00:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: Senryu has to do with human nature and cannot rhyme, unlike a Haiku which has to do with nature. The 5-7-5 syllable rule applies. Dedicated to my husband!
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 50
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Comments10

  • Michael Edwards

    Superb collection and a lovely surprise to read this early (6.30am in the UK) in the morning. great stuff Christina.

    • Christina8

      I appreciate your kind review! Thanks again! Christina

    • Frank Prem

      Tese work well, I think, Christina. Well done.

      • Christina8

        Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful senryu Christina.

        • Christina8

          Thanks Goldfinch! I appreciate it!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Ohhhhhhhhh CHRISINA ~ Wonderful to feel the passion back in your Poetry. You lovely SENS echo perfection of sensual Love in a perfet marriage ! Pasionate Fury ~ Spoken love ~ Untamed Bliss ~ ENTANGLED ~ WOW ~ I need a cold shower ! Hugs from your BROTHER ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my MPS Family POEM ~ Thanks B.

          • Christina8

            I'm glad you enjoyed my sensory words! lol I appreciate your kind feedback as always brother--hugs-Christina

          • dusk arising

            There is FIRE in your words. The fire of passion. Love these short pieces.

            • Christina8

              Thanks so much dusk! I really appreciate your kind review!

            • WL Schuett

              Very well done the feeling shine through

              • Christina8

                Thanks so much! I appreciate the read and review!

              • WriteBeLight

                Super Christina!

                • Christina8

                  Thanks so much WBL!

                • Tony36

                  Great collection

                  • Christina8

                    Thanks Tony!!

                    • Tony36

                      Welcome

                    • orchidee

                      Passion?! Have to swoon at that! Mind you, I swoon at anything remotely 'hot'. heehee. Good write C.

                      • Christina8

                        Thank you very much orchidee! Appreciated!

                      • myself and me

                        "Tangled up in love
                        The world has come to a halt
                        Untamed bliss ignites"

                        Amazing. Absolutely amazing. Both the poem and the love.

                        • Christina8

                          I am so happy with your response, I am blushing that you think it's amazing. Very much appreciated review!



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