THE SEASONS
SPRING
Scales fall as leaf blades break
and whirling sepals effloresce
with misting sprays in harmony
reflecting seasons early cast.
SUMMER
Dressed in hues of deepest green
the fields and hedges, trees and moors
with still no mottled leaf as yet
to fade from colours die.
AUTUMN
Wilting growth in brawling tides
of mewing winds that tread the hills
with rustling ebbs of autumn hues
beneath a shredding canopy.
WINTER
As stones that lie in frozen pools
when days grow short and ice accrues
and all that lies within is bathed
beneath a blankets cold caress.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: August 30th, 2017 00:00
- Comment from author about the poem: At last I've got to the end having written Spring last - hope it was worth it. Plus one of my abstracts
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- Users favorite of this poem: malubotelho, myself and me
Comments11
Well put together Michael. Would be nice to have the pics for each in its place, but bravo, good effort..
A fine write of all the pieces together, at 'zero hour' into the day! (0:00).
Ah - yes the early bird catches a chill - cheers O
Very good write Michael, the seasons all have their own beauty as does this poem.
Love the abstract.
Thanks Andy
Congratulations Michael, your four seasons are incredible. And this last painting is great too!
Thanks Fred I can move on to something else now.
Well seasoned , fine writing Micheal , Fine abstract also
Thanks so much
The spring is so beautiful. Those are my colors. I use those color on my decoration. Thanks Michael for another beautiful poem. You are a talent.
Bless you Malu - you are so kind.
Amen
Great write, love the painting
Thanks Tony
Welcome
Gorgeous abstract with four-season color in it. Beautiful poems paint four abstract for each season.
Perfect.
So pleased you liked them - thanks for looking in.
The maestro rests his pen, having completed a masterwork. The effort was well worth it, Michael!
I'll pop something light hearted in the gallery tomorrow - thanks Louis
VIVALDI EAT YOUR HEART OUT ~ You have been eclipsed ! Thanks for completing Michael ~ The painting is a deconstructed Spring Meadow. For Men of my age Spring always promises much but oft times fails to "fully" deliver ! I should be a Pas de Diez by now ! Love the SPRING ODE ~ it describes just how I feel every MARCH ~ Yours BRIAN Both the lovely SANTITA and I have commented on ALL your Seasons # now it's payback time (we know where you live !) Click on DEVELOPING (in the Fusions Section) And SANTITA'S FUSION on "Dream Job when you were Young" will be revealed ~ there are eight entries to date. A pithy personal poem from your fair hand would ameliorate the rest ~ OK Thanks in anticipation ~ Yours BRIAN.
Thanks Brian - job done
Like four buttons on a jacket for all weathers. They all come together bathed beneath the lovely blaize of colour above. The whole is more than the sum of its individual parts.
Thanks dusk - it came together in the end though I did worry about it having set myself up for a potential fall.
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