Hanging on to life
like an oak leaf in fall,
with minutes or hours left,
just trying to get through it all.
Her eyes close one last time.
So her spirit can roam free.
Unchained of her earthly prison,
Now she can fly with the angels happily!
She died like she lived-
with pride and dignity.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 31st, 2017 00:43
- Comment from author about the poem: Just describing a special person I know who has passed today.
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Lovely words - I warmed to this lady even though I never knew her - a lovely write written with dignified humility.
Very touching words--thank you so much Michael!
Very nice
Thank you very much! I appreciate that!
Beautiful write and tribute for that special person. She will always be with you.
Thank you so much for your kind words, Goldfinch!
Now that is quite quite beautiful. Even better for a second reading. Touched me. Saved to my favourites.
Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate the favorite save.
Condolences... beautiful poetry
Thank you WL! I appreciate it a lot!
My sincerest condolences, this was a wonderful message from you which I'm sure she'll appreciate.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words!
"She died like she lived-
with pride and dignity."
That's a full life to live.
I am sorry for your loss. She is an angel now.
Thank you so much for your kind words of sympathy!
Christina you wrote something very very beautiful and heartfelt here. Even though death is sad for the ones left behind, you caught a spirit of joy, maybe even happiness. And the last two lines are incredibly beautiful.
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your kind words!
Thanks CHRISTINA ~ for sharing and caring ! In the end we would all prefer to die with PRIDE & DIGNITY ~ Elegant poem ~ lovely tribute ! You are in my PRAYERS 24/7 Hugs for Ever ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@@@
Thank you so much Brian! Really appreciate the thoughts and prayers--Hugs back to you! Christina
Beautiful poem Cristina. Made me remember my mother. I felt like she was free again when she passed away. I miss her but have no pain.
Thank you for your wonderful comment and saving as a favorite. Very appreciated!
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